T Time

where would we be without them eh' T's that is...

T Time

 

Time teases

twists and tangles truth

then

tears to tiny tainted tasteless

transient titbits

through and through

though then again

those torn threads

turn tail triumphant

that is till

the truth

totally transformed

then gone

transferred without a trace

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

stimulating commentary on time and how we view events as it passes .. the twists and turns are provocative says i ... as truth morphs with each remembering until it transfers out ... poof! read it several times ... its a challenge to the tongue and mind alike ..
E.

[Neville]

now who could wish for more, not I say's I.. ta Gene, say's me :))

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahahha and so say we! :)

[Neville]

Bless all of thee :))

[Fay Slimm]

Yes time transports truth by turning tail on tangible trust and tempts by trespassing on treasured triumphs - - -tending to transient thought-threads before being torn keeps love's timeless techniques tenderly turning - - -- - wow - have run out of TTTTtssssss - -- but nuff sed methinks.......................x

[Neville]

To tell ya the truth Fay, in the time it took me to track this page down and thank you good n proper, I coulda turned tail and trekked to Timbuctoo .. Terribly tedious that tho so thanks again my friend and true :)

Neville

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, time tucks (Had to keep the alliteration going somehow.).

[Neville]

tuck me... so ya did you old rascal you... :)

[Ted Kniffen]

I mus say Nev wihou the T I jus be ed. A delighful diy hat's more han ever enjoyable. Not bad wih the allieraion eiher. Keep i up.
A hot cuppa in he evening wih he evening news is always appreciaed.

A good wrie Nev ... once again, ed.

[Neville]

hank you oo ed.. much apprecia ed ed.. now I sound like an echo... Neville :)

[Papaya]

I'm not even gonna try at a clever comment.
I haven't dotted my eyes with coffee beans yet.
What do they call this, alliteration?
I find with most poems like this they fail because it's a forced effort but you've created something coherent that hangs tight and flows nice as a glass of iced tea on a hot day. Cheers.

[Neville]

hey.. how cool is that.. thanks a billion Ana.. ya just made me cuss out loud and I had to pretend to the gang me trousers just caught fire or summat.. you know wot its like when ya caught on the hop :)

[Papaya]

Ha! Nice... :)

[Neville]

............................... :)

[Troy Henson]

Anyone for a cuppa? I’m here for another

[Neville]

you are most welcome .. and thanks for stopping by

[Patricia Wedel]

Being a Tea totaler I can taste the tenderness of translucent tickles where Tango times are a trillion Tales of temptation told. I toss my halo to the top of a Tree where Time is sprinkled like Thyme on treacherous tethered feathers. Tit tat, Pat

[Neville]

Took me breath away & totally true, thanks Pat x

[Patricia Wedel]

You are the Guy who paints the Sky with
Images of romance and angels flying by unencumbered by your smile. tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

........................................... :) x

[Chris Shaw]

without t's there would be no tea for two nor a whole lo of oher hings oo good to menion . i can' conemplae only 25 leers in he alphabe. hat would be shor changing he reader don' cha hink
le us celebrae he wenieh leer in he alpabe.

Chris

[Neville]

I no e ya inadver en ly slipped one in up here by mis ake, so ya di .. bu anyway, jus wanna hank you and muchley oo ..

Neville Pe i ... :) x

[Chris Shaw]

So you are righ. I jus reread and found my misake. Hanks for poining i ou. I am graeful o ya. Us women jus ove being pu in he picure by hose who know beer:))

Chrisine Anne Shaw

[Neville]

you got a thing about L's too.. I love em mesen, the way they can turn their heads write round n stuff... oh n I do like an occasional ale.. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Oh blimey I made anoher misake, I ook an l ou :)) aking he l ou of love hough is good is i no?

[Neville]

nah, that's just takin the P..

[Chris Shaw]

:))..............

[Norman 223]

Trying to to top this
Tempted to tackle this too.
Too timorous to try, though.
Ta Ta!!!
Norm.

[Neville]

no competition sir Norm, I submit .. you win hands down... N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

May I have another cup, please?

[Neville]

You may indeed sir.. most welcome & cheers is that with or without milk n n sugar like me :)
Hey, I just thought .. if we lost all out T's I would hardly have a surname at all :) N.

[Neville]

you may have noticed there are too many n's up there:)