Climax

Climax

A Poem by Neville
"

every now and then, I just fancy lighting up.... dont you...

"

 


Climax

 

After a series of

Deliberate  

well placed strokes

Some kind of fusion

Occurred 

Then they reached

For a cigarette …

 

 

 

© 2020 Neville


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Only smoked as an experiment at 16. Soon gave it up, but I have seen how others crave to have a fix at certain times. After meals, after fusion (that lesson in physics you were writing about :) Your title reminds me of eating a bar of chocolate.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


glad I knocked it on the head yonks back.. still fancy one every now and again tho... you pr.. read more



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I’m mostly a one pack a day man so I appreciate and relate very much. It resolves many things for me. And the much needed clarity after heady or a disappointing moment is invaluable. Great point sir!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


I understand your point completely Pestonjee and would emphasise quitting was one of the har.. read more
Only smoked as an experiment at 16. Soon gave it up, but I have seen how others crave to have a fix at certain times. After meals, after fusion (that lesson in physics you were writing about :) Your title reminds me of eating a bar of chocolate.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


glad I knocked it on the head yonks back.. still fancy one every now and again tho... you pr.. read more
Ah, the joys of a ciggie. Even though I quit years ago there are times when I would love to reach for one....you captured that perfectly here. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


My biggest regret ever is that I ever started smoking.. the next I only experience every now.. read more
I always find a cig the perfect reward for managing to scratch that itch. Life is much easier when you invest a few quid in a decent backscratcher. Mine is even extendable, i upgraded to the telescopic model 😀

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


I used to love the occasional King Edward but they are a bugga to keep lit when peeled.. Che.. read more
Lorry

4 Years Ago

Ha! Smoking chips 😀
Neville

4 Years Ago


I can never get the Rizla's to align 😀 N :)
God bless that cigarette and the words that appear as you blow the smoke.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Cheers Paul.. you been there too :)

Neville

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