Climax

every now and then, I just fancy lighting up.... dont you...

 

Climax

 

After a series of

Deliberate  

well placed strokes

Some kind of fusion

Occurred 

Then they reached

For a cigarette …

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Only smoked as an experiment at 16. Soon gave it up, but I have seen how others crave to have a fix at certain times. After meals, after fusion (that lesson in physics you were writing about :) Your title reminds me of eating a bar of chocolate.

Chris

[Neville]

glad I knocked it on the head yonks back.. still fancy one every now and again tho... you probably guessed already but this hard man is more a bag o boiled peps kinda geezer .. Cheers Chris :)

Neville

[R.E. Ray]

Only 35 syllables but so much imagination and space for the reader to add whatever. I’ve never smoked a cigarette but I’ll admit to bourbon, which also brings good sleep. Good piece, Neville.

[Neville]

Hell.. I'll drink to that sir.. many thanks indeed and I seriously appreciate the tip..
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Hell.. I'll drink to that sir.. many thanks indeed and I seriously appreciate the tip..

Neville

[Eilis]

I don’t think this is about smoking at all, haha. It’s sort of like haiku erotica, or the way a parent who doesn’t want to explain the birds and the bees might work it out when the boy keeps asking questions. It’s a clever poem, and I love how it leaves so much to the imagination.
And the discussion about smoking is great. I used to love the way a good puff would go down after too, too many drinks. But many a moon ago I left both behind. It seems a bit like a rite of passage. Cool poem, Neville.

[Neville]

I am absolutely delighted you found these words dear Eilis and also very pleased that you considered them so thoroughly...

I am indeed a most grateful Neville :)

[Beccy]

And found that the packet was empty... bit of an anticlimax that would be. :))

Beccy.

[Neville]

some things just dont bare thinking about, do they :)

[barleygirl]

Tried for several summers to hack it (cigs), but couldn't. Always a stoner at heart, but the exact same principle applies, as far as craving a toke after the splash. Love your little dabbles that evoke a river of ink in our ruminations (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

quitting was one of the hardest things I have ever done.. as you can see tho.. there are moments... cheers BG (drags) fondly

Neville :)

[Papaya]

So bad for the cardio though, the smoking.
Still, it fits so well with the poem.

[Neville]

phew.. thought I had blown it for a minute :)

[Unspoken poet]

Don't really know what it's like to smoke, never picked up the habit. I hear it's really hard to quit.

[Neville]

nicotine is one of the most addictive substances on the planet... thank you for stopping by..

[Patricia Wedel]

I love a Climatic ending to a good Mystery...
Kisses are smoking warm... Pat

[Neville]

bless you my friend.... warm thank on the way :)

[John the Baptist]

Of course, some of those series are longer than others. Much longer.

[Neville]

Thanks for checking in John...

Neville

[Robert Trakofler]

I am confusioned... what does he mean that Nev:0 Oh I have been spitting atoms for for a long time:/ I have quit drinking use of recreational drugs, bad relationships and loose women (mostly) even eating butter but never could quit cigarettes:(

[Neville]

well there ya go see... we are identical opposites... lol.....

Nev :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i would like to see them light up after coming to terms of equality...the climax of tensions erased...that would induce the most pleasure....thank you for letting me go there with this piece...
my thoughts are trapped in a dark room these days.
j.

[Neville]

Thank you for taking time to consider these words jacob.. I hope things brighten up sir, I truly do

N.