Falling for Icarus

its just one of them things I've been itchin to try... fly that is.. sorry fella's

Falling for Icarus

 

It was all too easy

Falling in love I mean..

 

Just look at

those shoulders man

 

And since he dumped

the excess plumage

 

Sshh babe, I feel

I might just somehow fly

 

Author's Note

I've always wanted to write a 21st century Greek tragedy....that's write tragedy.. not travesty

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Poor Icarus flying too close to the sun. He had a long way to fall. Falling in love is easy for some, not for others. You can fly without wings. I do, frequently. I soar in the thermals of my mind. And I will stop there. Your little piece of brevity has so much between the lines, I am I danger.... of writing a book :)

[Neville]

falling is easy.. its the getting up that's hard.. hey.. I wanna copy :)

[Chris Shaw]

Yeah, hitting the ground leaves a bloody mess :)

[Neville]

is that not relative to the height and speed of descent.. he smiles, trying to keep this exchange decent :)

[Chris Shaw]

I was never any good at physics :)

[Neville]

No prob but wot about

[Chris Shaw]

wot about wot :)

[Neville]

The phone rang and I hit the send button in error.. I meant to say .. but what about

[Chris Shaw]

Saved by the bell. That's wot the B Gees said.....

[Neville]

Maybe...,.

[emmajoy]

There's nothing better than a flight of fancy, Mr. P! It's the old adage, try it, learn from it.. then, go write a tongue in cheek patch of wisdom!

[Neville]

one truly does try, thank you emmajoy

[emmajoy]

An answer to inspire a few extra smiles, Neville.

[Neville]

sometimes, maybe there are no lines to read between :)

[emmajoy]

Laughing, should have guessed! :)