Briefly

tiz wot makes poetry innit.. or at least sum of it... maybe :)

Briefly

 

As briefly as her wine weary lids

They did flutter and close
She slipped into bed minus all of her clothes …

~~~ 

The rest of course, is now history

Occasionally revisited tho, on cold winter nights

But a gentleman, never tells…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

memories eh'.. who would have em..

Reviews

[Lorry]

Briefly briefless and thanks to our very own internal hard drive, we can play the rest on demand, with a far away look in our eye and a smile at the memory of it all... Until those dreaded words are heard "Whatcha thinking?"
In case you're stuck for an answer, keep these handy...
A. I was just thinking of the day I first looked into your eyes dear.
B. I was thinking how beatiful the language of poetry is dear.
C. I was just thinking about that lasagne you made last week, when's dinner?

It's always safest to go with A, and never what you're actually thinking. Like how many jelly babies I could fit in my mouth, or if I could fly, I'd s**t on the neighbours bmw.
For some reason they disapprove of such things.

Ps... You're welcome 😀

[Neville]

is a response really necessary :) jeez sorry.. I almost forgot.. we have no neighbours :) Cheers Lorry...…….

Neville

[augustus]

Lovely jubbley! As Del boy would have it!

[Neville]

............…. triffick :)

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, he does not! At least that's how it used to be. Nowadays he might make a video.

[Neville]

How the world has changed.. although I guess it always has and always will... thanking you for gracing this page sir :)

[Chris Shaw]

We have much time on our hands at the moment to think and reflect. I took a poetic trip myself into the past with one of my writes. Yours is much hotter than mine. Yours made me smile. Yours is certainly one to keep you warm on cold nights :))

Nicely done Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

sending my sincere thanks Chris in a kinda warm & kinda kind kinda way ..

Neville

[Unspoken poet]

too true, neither do women as to that point.
Nicely done and said

[Neville]

Phew.. thank you …

[AJNJ]

Telling it would be killing the poetry in it. Perhaps, the best of our poetry stays in our minds and memories. Loved the wine weary lids.

[Neville]

ah' bless ya my friend.. aye.. sometimes one has to say it as is... or indeed was...

[AJNJ]

You are welcome, dear friend. Thanks for the sheer poetry in your words.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha yes ... those memories ...sexy brief sir! :)
https://youtu.be/tBOWznmFLxQ
E.

[Neville]

hello my dear friend and brother.. so good to see you sir... many thanks for showin ya face...I so hope you and yours are all well … tried the link Gene but nowt happens

N.

[Einstein Noodle]

bummer ... try again! its a good one you will like, i think
https://youtu.be/tBOWznmFLxQ

[Neville]

Dunno whether its you or me Gene but nuffink shows... (:

[Einstein Noodle]

hm works for me .. its the song Memories are Made of This with Elvis singing it ...i drank a dram yesterday and lifted it to you and gram ... think i will do the same today :))))))))))))))))))))))) peace brother!

[Neville]

I shall investigate .. and thanks for that Gene... I shall raise my shot glass to ya this very eve.. :)))