True Colours

True Colours

 

Hey Blue

You tried so hard

To hide them 

But in the end tho

Your colours 

Just bled through 

Hey Babe

I notice you’re not

Turquoise any more

Reviews

[barleygirl]

How can I not see/say it? TURQUOISE & OTHER SHADES OF BLUE -- Nev's book, a worthy accompaniment to leisure! *wink! wink!* Now for this poem specifically -- in the USA, people so belligerently blast their "colors", there's no guesswork, so the phrase "true colors" may be obsolete here now *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Thanks for the advert Margie and for visiting these latest words …. (PLUGS) fondly... Neville

[Anjeline]

Such a cool style of writing dear friend. Very nice,especially the use of "hey" and the two colors:)

[Neville]

How very kind of you my friend... and appreciated no end...

[Coyote Poetry]

We rarely see the true colors of another. Your poetry was sweet, honest and true. When we love the hidden ugly face of another. This is love. Thank you Neville for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

and thank you my friend for stopping by and considering my little scribble.. much and always appreciated..

Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem my friend and you are welcome.

[chrysantheranium]

No matter what we paint ourselves to be, mediums fade and yellow over time, and sometimes the colors we once thought were sweet don't tend to age well... Shades apart, we may be the same deep down, but will never stop changing. Growth starts somewhere and we are all a spectrum of constant metamorphosis.

Beautifully written! Simple but truthful.

[Neville]

you are far too kind for words young sir.. but I thank you regardless :)

[Robert Trakofler]

i'm all red no matter how hard I hold my breath I would of course prefer to be blue maybe thats why I cant quit smoking:?

[Neville]

It took me ages to quit.. one of the hardest things I've ever done... thanks for stopping by Robert.. Hope you remain safe n well..

Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no matter what colors we try to represent, what feels on the inside dyes to get out of us and give our moods away.
j.

[Neville]

I concur.... cheers jacob.
N.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

A shade a hue did fade...from blue to grey ...a shade away...🌹🌹🌹

[Neville]

you better jot that one down quick, lest some one else uses it.... a delightful response to my latest little scribble … bless ya Kelly n true...