The Wind Cried Mary

The Wind Cried Mary

A Poem by Neville
"

.... My dear Mum Mary passed away a year ago today early ..

"

 

The Wind Cried Mary

 

The wind it

Called her name

And she was gone

But a star

Was born instead

 

And while no one

Knows

For sure

Just how many

Stars burn bright

 

Mark these words

My friend another one

Shall surely shine tonight

While I shall whisper soft 

Her name again that of Mother

 

© 2020 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

... these words were written on the morning I first became an orphan .. and when I never felt more vulnerable ..

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Sorry to hear of your loss my friend. I feel a bit like an imposter, as no words will ease your hurt.
As your words support, this is a time for remembering all the good she brought and those around you, as well as tears and quiet contemplation. We'll still be here when you return. Go and deal with the important and we will be thinking of you.

Lorry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly Lorry



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Such a loss to accept especially when sudden and my heart goes out to your and your family Neville - may your dear Mom's star bring you needed comfort as you mourn yet celebrate Mary's fine gift of herself to your lives - - - with you all in thought and spirit ..............from Fay

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you Fay
Dear Neville, this is a beautiful poem for what I’m sure was a beautiful soul. I’m sure all of us here at WC will be waiting for your return when you are ready. My thoughts are with you. x

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you my friend
Sorry to hear of your loss my friend. I feel a bit like an imposter, as no words will ease your hurt.
As your words support, this is a time for remembering all the good she brought and those around you, as well as tears and quiet contemplation. We'll still be here when you return. Go and deal with the important and we will be thinking of you.

Lorry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly Lorry
A beautiful poem, Neville - short and sweet, with a lot of emotion behind each and every line. I'm keeping you and your family in my thoughts and I'm sending good energy in your direction. May she rest in peace.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

I could not ask for anything more.. many thank you's and true..
Dear Neville your words are beautiful. I am so sorry for the loss of your dear Mum. May she RIP and I for one will be looking into the heavens tonight for that extra star. Take care of yourself while you grieve.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you.
so sorry for your loss, Neville...i understand as you know...5 years ago, lost mine...
this is beautiful, and she is looking down, reading and appreciating her son.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you jacob..
This is such a beautiful write, I really your words....

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

really.. then I thank you..

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