The Wind Cried Mary

The Wind Cried Mary

A Poem by Neville
"

.... My dear Mum Mary passed away a year ago today early ..

"

 

The Wind Cried Mary

 

The wind it

Called her name

And she was gone

But a star

Was born instead

 

And while no one

Knows

For sure

Just how many

Stars burn bright

 

Mark these words

My friend another one

Shall surely shine tonight

While I shall whisper soft 

Her name again that of Mother

 

© 2020 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

... these words were written on the morning I first became an orphan .. and when I never felt more vulnerable ..

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Sorry to hear of your loss my friend. I feel a bit like an imposter, as no words will ease your hurt.
As your words support, this is a time for remembering all the good she brought and those around you, as well as tears and quiet contemplation. We'll still be here when you return. Go and deal with the important and we will be thinking of you.

Lorry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly Lorry



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One feels vulnerable at whatever age a parent leaves us. This poem is a beautiful expression of your grief and sense of loss. No wonder the sky is brighter today....Sending you a hug, dear friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


Thank you PJ for the gift of these lovely words .. Neville
AJNJ

4 Years Ago

You are welcome, dear friend.
Dear Neville, anniversaries are such a painful reminder and we live those moments all over again. Your mum safe in spirit with your dad, for eternity. Remember that in your sorrow.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


... thanks Chris and I really do mean that .. I just dont know where that year went
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Speed, it can be a curse sometimes and a blessing at others. Not a good thing as you age though, gen.. read more
my dear Neville, how the stars will fail to cry for these most beautiful and moving words? I'm so sorry I was late to read this gem and send You my warm condolences, they say the Wind goes and never come back to a place which She (the Wind) passed by, so Your words here are even more movingly sentimental.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you so much my friend your visit here does mean such a lot to me.. N
Sorry for your loss, Neville, and surely a new star will appear in the heavens...I will look for it tonight.
My own Mum is going on 95...still OK with the exception of the dementia, but not looking forward to the end whenever that shall come. Only God knows for sure.

Take care friend. If it's any consolation...love never dies...it lives on in the heart.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Thanks Ted, you are very kind my friend and always appreciated...
I am so sorry Nev, in a poor replacement for a strong hug and a firm shoulder... all i can say is you keep her star shining a brilliant blaze in the person that you are! of that i have no doubt:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly Robert
Sorry for your loss & feeling amazed how you can share such sparkling sentiments when your heart is probably wracked! This is the sweetest goodbye I've ever read. So lyrical like a caress, your title is stunning! (((AWED))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you Margie..you really are most kind..

Neville
Neville, I'm truly sorry to read about your dear mother. What a warm, heartfelt tribute to her. With poems like this one, we should never forget our lost loved ones... or the ones they reared to honor their memory.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly my friend.. a much appreciated visit and review comment ..... Neville
No matter whether expected or not Neville this is a hard thing to bear and your world will not be quite the same.
Take care.
Alan

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

your words here are so much welcomed Alan I am very near blown away with positivity and kind regards.. read more
What beautiful words at such a sad, sad time, Neville. Be sure that your darling Mary's star will shine forever and ever, whether day or night. Love and prayers to and for you and your family.


Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly emmajoy
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Gee
So, so sorry for your loss Neville, my thoughts and best wishes are with you and your family.
Take care

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly Gee

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