Sometimes I Do Wonder

Sometimes I Do Wonder

 

 

Does she still

Not wear make up

And prefer cotton to silk

 

Is she still

Kind of crazy and

Cry over spilt milk

 

Does she still

Dance on tables on

Sidewalks and gutters

 

Does she still talk to

Trees and love bees

Daisies and buttercups

 

Does she still

Kick her shoes off

And have grass on her knees

 

Does she still not

Chew gum but hold her

Teacup tween finger and thumb

 

Does she still sneak the

Occasional cigarette and do

Daft things just for the hell of it

 

Hey buddy

Why dont you lighten up

She might just once have been mine

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

pure torture to loose in love ... she sounds like such a fine, exciting, fun woman ... i just tuned in to the perspective of the poem ... its in first person who is third person ... writing a poem that first person reads ... and the turn and closing is quite tricky ..and becomes first person telling third person ... a personal poem says i!? ;) clever writing my friend ... i like it!
E.

[Neville]

Ha.. I always aim for a draw.... it always seems so much fairer .. bless ya...

N :)))

[Einstein Noodle]

https://youtu.be/m35DdsuM5Oo

[Neville]

How cool is that... never heard before but sure to hear again... a bit like a cross between Jethro Tull and Phil Collins/Genesis .. and yes, I am still listening......... cheers sir...... Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! they are aren't they .. love Jethro :)

[Neville]

Me too ... Have you ever heard Wolf Alice.... my new fave band of the moment... check em on YouTube :)

[Einstein Noodle]

no i haven't ... going there now tho .. and then signing off ... so i bid you adieu ..top o' the mahrnin' to ya

[Neville]

back at ya my friend .. go well and go safe :)

[Ardra]

I like the lady in the poem and the closing lines...which made me smile... you never stop to amaze me... :)
Wonderfully done...

[Neville]

Hello stranger.. how good to hear from you my friend.. thank you so much for stopping by this page.... Hope life is good and you are well :)

[Ardra]

Heheh ... i been on a break from words
Like keeping the wicked thing away from me...but it always find its way back like street dogs do... ;)

[Neville]

that's one way of putting it.. as long as you are both safe and doing okay... N