Oh gosh Neville,
I feel that this is most definitely the very best I have read of yours so far...
Made my heart ache as I do remember those days so very well...I read deeply between and behind your lines.
I loved this Neville...
Lisa, now back to reading, reviewing and actually posting!
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thank you for such a heart warming & encouraging visit Lisa .. Kindest Regards, Neville abou.. read more
Thank you for such a heart warming & encouraging visit Lisa .. Kindest Regards, Neville about to hop into the shower before setting off to work again :)
Thinking backwards is the most fun! Remember????? you crafted this so well...and the memories clearly...it seems like you grew together beautifully...and you've both made changes to suit one another and have succeeded in this... but the best part is that you have struck a note that we can all relate to....excellent writing Neville!
Warmly, B
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
I am thrilled Betty .. thank you so much for a heart-warming review & the accompanying thumb.. read more
I am thrilled Betty .. thank you so much for a heart-warming review & the accompanying thumbs up .. Bestly yours, Neville
Oh gosh Neville,
I feel that this is most definitely the very best I have read of yours so far...
Made my heart ache as I do remember those days so very well...I read deeply between and behind your lines.
I loved this Neville...
Lisa, now back to reading, reviewing and actually posting!
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Thank you for such a heart warming & encouraging visit Lisa .. Kindest Regards, Neville abou.. read more
Thank you for such a heart warming & encouraging visit Lisa .. Kindest Regards, Neville about to hop into the shower before setting off to work again :)
Another viewing of this tender hold on memories worth keeping when little things meant such a lot and you poem that time so very well here Nev. A most moving read...............x
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
I said it before and am gonna say it again, bless you my friend and truly true too .. :)
We seem to do more thinking backwards as we get older. When you are young you don't have the time. That warm rainwater sounds a delight. Sensual even. Good to read this a second time. Good morning Neville, windy woos this morning. Pegs well secured and we are staying put.
Chris
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
sounds like a good idea our Chris .. and thanks again :)
I used to think time was a thief but then I realized how many memories it's gifted me too.
Lovely to remember such moments, isn't it?
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Ah' but dont kid ya self kid .. time is indeed a thief .. it never just borrows and gives ba.. read more
Ah' but dont kid ya self kid .. time is indeed a thief .. it never just borrows and gives back .. that's why memories, photo's and poetry are so important .....
4 Years Ago
Yeah, probably true but I'm trying to look on the bright side, ya old curmudgeon :)
Time just tiptoes away, taking the laughter and the sun warm rain with it...
The love beneath the memory, and the wash of regret show this imagery in a kind of filtered photography mode, like Hollywood in the 70s.
Makes me wonder, and hope for you... may you rediscover the inside jokes stitched into the lining.
Great seeing you again, Nev! 😀😀
V
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
So good to have you here verse my friend.. it does seem an eternity for sure..... 😀😀read more
So good to have you here verse my friend.. it does seem an eternity for sure..... 😀😀
I think that looking back is an intrinsic part of our human condition Neville. Unfortunately we have to take the good and the bad. You've done a great poetic job here, sweet and tender with all these particular memories and then the bittersweet realisation that they are no longer together. I've found that when you reminisce with someone your recollections can be quite different.
Hope all's well with you.
Alan
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
hello Alan and thank you.. You are of course quite right regarding the sharing of recollections.. I .. read morehello Alan and thank you.. You are of course quite right regarding the sharing of recollections.. I have often been surprised by the marked difference, despite being aware of the many and varied reasons for this phenomenon....My eyes could be better but must not grumble... All Good Things to you and yours sir.... N