When One is Loved

When One is Loved

When one is loved

Like this

Magnificently 

That is

Even breathing then

May seem a chore no less

When all one

Really wants to be

Is be alone together then

Now and always

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

to be together alone or alone together...either way...when it really is love through the good and bad, it definitely is just like breathing...as simple as that...love keeps us alive---
another crisp, succinct write that packs a wallop of feeling.
j.

[Neville]

Thank you kindly jacob.

Neville

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'When One is Loved'
Neville Pettitt,
This reminds me of how when one stands still and absorbs beauty the reality becomes very simple and powerful. To be thankful is a true and powerful. It is the seeing and accepting of a gift. To know, to see, to love and accept love. What a gift. Nice work.
Kathy

[Neville]

I am delighted you came to visit these words my friend.. many thanks indeed for considering them and your encouraging message.... Neville

[Robert Trakofler]

Nev I got to say I have never touched you nor even shook your hand but i will wager you are one of the most loved souls I will ever know. When I muse about the true scale of a life well spent and imagine myself standing naked next to divinity and i'm weighed measured I imagine one side of my scale being opportunity of and the other side the hearts that you held and touched bolstered a blushed. for to my core and i think yours that is the true wealth of life.

[Neville]

Sheesh.. I'm completely bowled over my Friend.. what a lovely sentiment you bestow on me today... Your kind words are something more than just appreciated.

Neville

[Ted Kniffen]

Ah, Neville, you romantic old dog, these words should be required reading for newlyweds and a special speech at all milestone anniversaries.
I cannot picture my life without my best friend and I do get jealous when our time is interrupted.

A good write, friend.

[Neville]

We are clearly both blessed... and thank you Ted for the kind comment, it is appreciated & true...

[Ted Kniffen]

It see that it is.

[Neville]

........ tis true :)

[Lydia Shutter]

So much emotion in this one, Neville. To feel such love....to want to be together with the rest of the world falling away....ah, that is divine. Yes, it is magnificent to be loved in such a way. Wonderful. Lydi**

[Neville]

I am so glad you called in Lydi** your visits are always looked forward to and invariably appreciated..... Neville

[lightsong]

all lovers dream to live in their own world, together and alone, even if for a day in a year... that is the loveliest dream :)

[Neville]

How very bloomin true and how very bloomin kind of you to help me remind everyone who wanders into our space......... Neville

[Fay Slimm]

Twas my pleasure and meant every word.

[Fay Slimm]

Magnificently is a wonderful way to love and feel loved.......... being alone then is all anyone would ever need..........thanking you Nev. for this romantic gem which should go into my favourites .............. Fay

[Neville]

I must write out one hundred times 'dont let this go to ya head Nev' .... thank you Fay for another delightful review comment on my words here... Neville :)

[Trouble]

I really liked this, well written, and well done.

[Neville]

Well thank you Allie & muchly so.... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

So much feeling oozing through each line. Togetherness like this is as near perfect as you can get. When you fit together like a glove then no one else is relevant. This is eternal love, for now and forever.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Chris.

Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

This is love story in a nutshell, Dear N! When one has love like that ; I.e. being loved magnificently, who needs the rest of the world? Want it to disappear forever.

[Neville]

now wouldn't that be just dandy...... thank you ever so much M and always.......... :) N

[Mrudula Rani]

It's entirely my pleasure. Tudo de bom ( all the best)