Underwear

a bit tongue in cheek maybe but then, where else would ya have me...

Underwear

 

Her slip it slipped

Significantly

 

Her shift it shifted

Slightly

 

Where would she have

Me rest my head tho

 

All be it laid

So very lightly

 

Come my love

Pray tell me do

 

Beneath the quilt

And show me where

 

Somewhere neath

Your underwear

 

Come unto me and

Show me where

 

Pray show me

Show me show me

Author's Note

be gentle with me

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

underwear in understatement and in your setting and scene are most provocative sir! even white cotton fruit of the loom oldies undies :))))))) she must be a slip shifter shaper ... the plea from your protagonist is some of the best sex advice one can give and/or take ... show me ... will always lead to mutual contentment and satisfaction ... if answered honestly ... i really like this one sir .. its got me blood moving in the right direction this morning
E.

[Neville]

and you made my day too sir, so ya have.... N :))

[augustus]

Simply written but very effective without slipping into sexual temptation!

[Neville]

Thank you kindly.... Neville

[Fay Slimm]

A lusty slice of romantic nugget could not have been scribed better methinks.............. a sigh of a read after midnight my friend.

[Neville]

way past my bed time Fay but delighted that you alighted..... Neville

[Pete]

sounds like a slippery road. somehow i doubt that you need to be shown the way. good write, a little off the beaten path ... :)

[Neville]

Thank you sir... I must admit, I much prefer to walk where the grass still stands upright........ Neville

[barleygirl]

I love this whimsical trail you lead us down . . . down to the nether regions! Nicely-placed crumbs to spark imagery along the way, multiplying your thread into pleasant sideroads in my mind! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I just luv them sideroads Margie and thank you for reminding me where I metaphorically keep my stash o crumbs of comfort........ NUG ya N :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Alright, then. Gentle, it is. Somehow, you combined naughty with innocence and created a gem. Still smiling, I am.

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Samuel sir, that'll do nicely, ever so nicely..... Neville

[Kelly Scheppers]

...perhaps, your head should come to rest - upon her breast. I loved her slip, slipping - significantly!

[Neville]

thank you for taking a peek Kelly, and for the advice... Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, i feel like voyeur...
i just turned away!

[Neville]

Yeah, I couldn't bare it either.... cheers jacob :)

[Mrudula Rani]

You really know how to leave your readers amazed and wordless with the most tender, sensual words, dear Neville, and then request them to be gentle with you !!!!!!!

[Neville]

Thank you M.. You got me blushing all over again... thanks so much :)

[Ken Simm.]

How can you be gentle with someone so cheekily humourous and who knows it? I'm not being because its damn good.

[Neville]

and I never felt a thing.. bless you tho sir....

Neville