Truism

Truism

 

What we seem to have here

In abundance

Is much of the sameness

That eventually broke us.....

 

And

 

While the world is filled with such a moreness

It would seem

These words are nowt but a work in progress

 

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Truth

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Reviews

[lightsong]

Oh wow dear Neville! this is absolutely brilliant and amazing, a double-edged sword, any belief one can take it and use it either of the good or for the bad, life changes and as life changes a knowing man will understand that not everything which was applied in 10000.. years ago can be applied in nowadays, it has been changing too, in these long years to fit the certain days.

[Neville]

My word, what an absolutely splendid perspective my friend and thank you for the oh wow.. that must surely be my first....... :)

[lightsong]

G is :)ing with a thankful blush*

[Neville]

.................. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Moreness that leads to emptiness.

[Neville]

indeed.. as stated on the tin... ta my friend.. you are indulging me this mane & I thank ya for it :)

[barleygirl]

I can't tell if I understand your poem, I'm not sure I understand Light's take on your poem. All I know is that "sameness" kills me, while at the same time, I crave routine. The trick is having a routine, but not doing the same things in the same ways. It's a random routine . . . a work in progress *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

the fact you visited is good enough for me Margie & true.... I like the idea of random routines too, so I do..... wink wink :)