Truism

Truism

 

What we seem to have here

In abundance

Is much of the sameness

That eventually broke us.....

 

And

 

While the world is filled with such a moreness

It would seem

These words are nowt but a work in progress

 

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Truth

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Reviews

[lightsong]

Oh wow dear Neville! this is absolutely brilliant and amazing, a double-edged sword, any belief one can take it and use it either of the good or for the bad, life changes and as life changes a knowing man will understand that not everything which was applied in 10000.. years ago can be applied in nowadays, it has been changing too, in these long years to fit the certain days.

[Neville]

My word, what an absolutely splendid perspective my friend and thank you for the oh wow.. that must surely be my first....... :)

[lightsong]

G is :)ing with a thankful blush*

[Neville]

.................. :)

[Robert Trakofler]

Nev you’re on a wave of daggers lately! Damn I ne’er spat out my coffee when I read this! Perhaps it’s time for you to run for office I would back you!!! All brilliance here

[Neville]

You just got me happy here Bad b... bless ya whiskers brother.. :)

Neville

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

That is all true.
And it'll always itself remain a truth.

Thumb up!

[Neville]

well I'll be blowed... thank you kindly Kay..

Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

If one can't find peace and growth in stability, they just want to wander in moreness ( my autocorrection refused to print moreness(?). You always leave me wondering the depths of your thoughts ( I am sure iam no where near grasping it,) dear N

[Neville]

Nevertheless, I am grateful that you continue to wonder and grasp, my dear M and true...

[Mrudula Rani]

I Just continue to wonder for the sheer pleasure of it...

[Neville]

Then I shall thank you again, just because I can....

[Kelly Scheppers]

The succinctness of your truism-ess, is without a doubt, picturesque. Lol, how's that?

[Neville]

In a word... picture perfect, or to be more precise in two words.... cheers Kelly..... Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

moreness? yes, maybe...but is it a goodness?

not sure of that...truth is something that right now seems so negative...when it finally comes out.

well spoken here, Neville,
j.

[Neville]

thank you jacob & I do mean that... thank you

Neville

[gram linski]

Go brother, haha loved the dark humour of yer language, I have written a poem called truism, completely different , but exactly the same, respect,

[Neville]

Bless ya.. I shall go check & get back to you... the concept of exactly the same but completely different is kinda cool............ N :)

[kentuck14]

Nev,
A wonderful thought put together here in such a suscienct way. thanks.
T

[Neville]

My word, you are spoiling me today Tom.. but I like the cut of your jib squire and aint complaining.. not one teeny bit :)

[Aurora]

How truantly true! Nicely penned Pettitt.

[Neville]

Then that'll do very nicely indeed, thank you Aurora.

[Einstein Noodle]

super creative sir! so very much said about relationships and the world .. thanks for sharing .. love the font and form .. unique and compelling!
E.

[Neville]

tis the wonder of words Gene.. not necessarily mine but of words in general.. we each see things in our own way, dont we... thank you kindly my friend :)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes we do .. and words are the best sir! dreadful power in them eh!?

[Neville]

dreadful power indeed :)))))

[Chris Shaw]

Moreness is equivalent to sameness in my book which can be monotonous. Variety is far preferable.
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We all need some framework, but not rigidity. Flexibility is good. I stopped wearing a watch when I left work. I decided I had no need for one.

Truisms are stating the blatantly obvious. A work in progress means you haven't given up. Telling the truth is better than telling lies.

I have no idea where you are travelling to with these words, my response is entirely guesswork. Some of your writes are so cryptic, this is one of them. Good morning Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

sometimes.. the wanting to see something serves only to hinder and impair the view... thanks for checking in tho and Good Morning.

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Ya know Neville I'm an imagery and emotion seeker. I saw and felt neither here, so if you were conveying emptiness, then I guess you were much more successful than you thought. And I mean that with the utmost respect.

Chris