Ah, "I left my hear in San Francisco." Actually never been there . . . my daughter and family just moved to a suburb of the place . . . says it's beautiful. I like the easy way to put this together, Nev. Great images . . . "he wore his uniform loud." What a great line! Well done my Brit buddy.
Tom
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Bless ya Tom.. I loved San Francisco ...a mighty big thank you winging its way to you from this side.. read moreBless ya Tom.. I loved San Francisco ...a mighty big thank you winging its way to you from this side of the Pond... Neville
How lovely and nostalgic! I have such a lovely, pleasant image of the belltop boy, makes me think about how pleasant life can be when it is simple; like old folks say it used to be!
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5 Years Ago
How very kind of you to say that LauraKate.. a much appreciated visit my young friend and true.... N.. read moreHow very kind of you to say that LauraKate.. a much appreciated visit my young friend and true.... Neville
A wonderful story in the poem. I liked the old hotels. The ancient feel and the ancient ways are missed. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
I love this little poem Neville. It reminds me of some of the old black and white films I used to watch years ago and yet your lines came through in wonderful colour. Well pressed uniform, brass buttons, not a hair or speck of dandruff in site, highly polished shoes, short back and sides, a wide smile and impeccable manners. It pleases me to know you still found some of this on your visit.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
thank you kindly Chris.. yes, that is precisely how it is
Neville
This is a great poem becuz of the way you choose the barest, most meaningful details to highlight. This the poster child for picking impactful details that convey VOLUMES about a thing/place/person. That's how you paint a huge tapestry in so few words! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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5 Years Ago
thank you ever so much Margie, another much appreciated visit.... it is such a shame I was unable to.. read morethank you ever so much Margie, another much appreciated visit.... it is such a shame I was unable to upload a photo of my hotel room.. NUGs back at ya and true... Neville :)
Ah, "I left my hear in San Francisco." Actually never been there . . . my daughter and family just moved to a suburb of the place . . . says it's beautiful. I like the easy way to put this together, Nev. Great images . . . "he wore his uniform loud." What a great line! Well done my Brit buddy.
Tom
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Bless ya Tom.. I loved San Francisco ...a mighty big thank you winging its way to you from this side.. read moreBless ya Tom.. I loved San Francisco ...a mighty big thank you winging its way to you from this side of the Pond... Neville