damn! somber and deadly serious ... doesn't matter which side it may or may not be .. the perspective of cold, hard and void come to mind as i shoulder that rig .... sheesh!!!!!!!! this is the second very serious poem in a row that i read ... wonder if its in the air or something :{ hope all is well with you sir
E.
not exactly sure of the subject here...i see kids being trained to kill...as is in some countries..no childhood...just immediately used to wage war...and the number thing...we felt like that in the sixties with the draft and the Vietnam War...just a number...war children. Powerful poem.
j.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
thank you jacob this kind of wrote itself after I saw some news footage.... N
damn! somber and deadly serious ... doesn't matter which side it may or may not be .. the perspective of cold, hard and void come to mind as i shoulder that rig .... sheesh!!!!!!!! this is the second very serious poem in a row that i read ... wonder if its in the air or something :{ hope all is well with you sir
E.