In a Moment Gone

In a Moment Gone

A Poem by Neville

In a Moment Gone

 

Far better

To be

For a moment


Than never

To be

For eternity

© 2019 Neville


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such simple words that show a complicated message so nicely.
it's like it is better to have love and lost than to never have loved at all.
just to be a moment for a moment...as poets we are in our moment now.
and what is left...is left for eternity...once we are gone.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

it seems you read right through me.. and for that, I am so very grateful jacob... cheers sir..
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The essence of my youthful "mountain man" infatuation (in the book) . . . it was better to have one delicious summer with the man, even tho I knew "forever" wouldn't be in the cards. Some people cannot seize the moment if they cannot get a guarantee, I guess! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

there are a lot of people around like that Margie... am planning on buying ya book this evening.. I .. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

Oh' n ta for the tip off.. NUG NUG :)
Ah, idk. You can't miss what you never had, could you? To be a for a moment and remembered for an eternity would be nicer though ;)


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Maybe.. but am gonna thank you any way, while I can, that is... thank you N:)
Each moment is to be savoured for we do not know how long our moments will last. I also have to agree with Jacob's response. Simply put yet says much. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Simple? That is not how I would describe you. You are complex, ocean deep., and some :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

shoulda gone to wrecksavers :)
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

:))...................
such simple words that show a complicated message so nicely.
it's like it is better to have love and lost than to never have loved at all.
just to be a moment for a moment...as poets we are in our moment now.
and what is left...is left for eternity...once we are gone.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

it seems you read right through me.. and for that, I am so very grateful jacob... cheers sir..
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Added on April 18, 2019
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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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