Poem

it may be similar, but baby, it aint the same...

Poem

 

This gift of words I give to you

a song without a tune

 

More precious than a starved

sky watched

 

Without a single

sun or star or moon

 

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I can always count on you to present an ordinary idea in a startling & thought-provoking way. Sometimes I need to have a second cup of coffee before I can comment on your ingenuity in like fashion! I love the phrase "starved sky" . . . it makes me want to stop describing everything in nature as being fulsome. I totally get how this sky looks (((NUGS))) . . . this time my typo was "NUBS"! Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I like it when your fingers slip.. I like NUBS too.. thank you Margie my friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description of poetry and the words. Honest and direct thoughts shared Neville. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

I am most grateful to ya sir....cheers, Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Cherrie Palmer]

The best gifts can and should be words, everything else is just thing's.

Wonderful piece without a tune but a sound cadence will always do :)

[Neville]

Thank you so much.... you are of course spot on..... bless ya Cherrie... N :)

[kentuck14]

Nev,
A highly imaginative poem. Less, indeed, can be more! If there are no heavenly lights, then let these simple poems light up the sky!
T.

[Neville]

thank you kindly, kind sir. and what a delightful illumination you propose and true.... Neville :)

[gram linski]

Beautiful sentiment, enough said

[Neville]

How very bloomin kind and appreciated too... Many thanks indeed, Neville

[AYVID N]

The most treasured kind of gift. I love a dark, night sky. It’s hypnotic.

[Neville]

it is indeed, thank you my friend... N

[AYVID N]

You’re most welcome, dear N.

[Lydia Shutter]

A poem every reader can identify with....sweet and short. Seems almost like a lullaby, Neville. Sweet. Lydi**

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Lydi**........... N

[Norman 223]

A gift of words wrapped inside a poem can so often become an elegant package.
Like this one,. Neville.
Norm.

[Neville]

You honour me sir Norm.. Bless ya. Get well, stay well and write on my friend.... Neville

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The forever gift. It truly is a wonderful energy!

[Neville]

How true and I thank you cuz...becuz I can & do always :)

[Chris Shaw]

A blank sky, no moon, no stars, no clouds, no sun, no rainbows, no birds, you have left an empty canvas. That tells me you have nothing to say. You have nothing to give.

I love the expression starved sky. I have a desire to feed the sky suddenly. It's all about balance.

Chris

[Neville]

My chosen way of life is all about balance Chris, the middle way.. one day I may tell you about the Dokun :) maybe.. N

[Chris Shaw]

I am always interested in what you have to say, so let it be :)

[Neville]

How did that sound... :)

[Chris Shaw]

You sound great :)

[Neville]

aw.. the next one is on me...

[Chris Shaw]

Make it a large red then and I will raise my glass to you :)

[Neville]

It was.... cheers :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

blank skies are kind of strange..much how we feel with no love. Empty...
j.

[Neville]

there are those I know that run on ether.. yes it is very sad indeed.. thank you jacob my friend...
N.