Pillar of Salt

Tis my only vice.. salt that is...

Pillar of Salt

 

My word

How she does

Love her

Sweet things

 

Whereas

He much

Preferred salt

 

She is clearly

Content tho

With her lot and life

 

Whilst he is

More than happy

With Lots wife

..

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Wel, I never thought I would have to admit to it, never mind use the insufferable term, but I actually did LOL at that. Oh, yhe shame of it. Next i'll no doubt be LMAOWSSMTT (laighing my a*s off, while somehow still managing to type. )
Bit I suppose it could be worse, I could have used the far more sinister NELI (not even laughing inwardly!) :)

[Neville]

Not on your Neli... cheers mate much appreciated and BGSOY2 old chap..... :)

[Papaya]

:) just smiling, Lots.

[Neville]

:)ing too thank you loads...

[Ted Kniffen]

Spice is the variety of life, ain't it. Those of us who sit below the salt will appreciate your words and those who sit above the salt are too busy polishing their tiaras.
Mine's a bit tarnished but it goes well with my crystal slippers.

Fun bit it is, maybe Lot should asked for the pepper mill.

[Neville]

you are of course quite write Ted and there's nowt like a bit o tarnish to polish off a good evening.. cheers & truly Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Take two to tangle and the wants of another, rarely similar. A lot said in the short poem Neville. Always a pleasure to read your work my friend.
Coyote

[Neville]

cheers Coyote.. N

[Coyote Poetry]

Cheers back to you my friend.

[Neville]

............ it has been a long day Johnnie C a very long day.. hope you are well my friend :)

[Beccy]

Sodom all I say, maybe Tomorrah will never come and anyway, I have always thought a pinch of salt adds to the flavour of life. :))

Beccy.

[Neville]

You are indeed a wise woman.. that and good taste too... bless you dear Beccy.. I do hope all is well in your neck o the woods... Neville :)

[Robert Trakofler]

I should be better prepared for reading you to insure less involuntary messes on my keyboard!

[Neville]

Bad bunny you.... they say line down helps :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol... you are a hoot
I hear she goes great with tequila.

[Neville]

she goes well with anything Cherrie.. you got me (lol) sure ya did... I raise my glass to you and true.... x

[Mrudula Rani]

Opposites attract:
She is the sweet he needs
to her deficits salt he adds!
A perfect couple made to stick!

[Neville]

they can and do indeed.. I needed that reminder M so thank you my dear and sweet friend..... N

[Mrudula Rani]

After reading other reviews, .... I have a feeling that I really didn't get the punch line, my friend.

[Neville]

it matters not one micro dot... I loved your take on these words and hey... whose to know ... even I'm not sure... x

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear friend.

[Neville]

.............. pleasure x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i guess males tend to be saltier and females sweeter...
yes, Lot's wife...is there a message in that biblical story, "just move forward, don't look back"---tends to make us jaded.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Clever write. Now Lot's wife was turned to a pillar of salt in the bible.I liken that to stone. Not much warmth in stone. Now you be careful with that salt Neville. It doesn't do your blood pressure any good.

Chris

[Neville]

ta.. tis my only vice our Chris & may well be the very death of me.... N

[Chris Shaw]

Cut the salt out :)

[Neville]

sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh

[Chris Shaw]

Quick, rub more salt in, it's a healer isn't it?

[Neville]

...... tiz... I'm in wun...