Tis Only Angels Crying

of course I believe in miracles... aren't they baby mirrors or summat

Tis Only Angels Crying

 

Stay home my lord

She said

It looks like rain today

 

No my love

He said

Tis only angels crying

Author's Note

stranger things happen at sea...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

If angel's were crying, then there would be no thunderstorms only light rainfall. There's plenty in the world for the angels to shed tears over. So much so you would think the sun would never come out. Lovely thoughts for the poetic among us.

Chris

[Neville]

absolutely bloomin precisely thank you our Chris... I was tempted to try & make this longer but then decided, no.. it never rains but it pours... :) N

[Chris Shaw]

We are in sync :)

[Neville]

we certainly are...................................... :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, I've always thought of rain as the sky crying over the loss of humanity in the world or something :x It's the clouds thundering which gets me though, like angels having a roaring fight amongst themselves lol
I like this. Interesting one. ;)

[Neville]

many gentle but genuine thank you's blown on a blustery day in your direction my friend.... hope you are well and have a splendid day.... Neville

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Tis Only Angels Crying'
Neville Pettitt,
You have written something which I wanted to become a novel. The two are standing in meieval times with an understanding of what the weather is and the word 'Lord' is fitting as well in reference to the husband. I felt it winsome and comforting somehow. Peaceful.
Kathy

[Neville]

maybe great minds think alike.. bless ya Kathy.. have a smiley and peaceful day my friend... N

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You too Neville!

[Neville]

........... :)

[Lorry]

Does that mean heaven is directly above Scotland then. Which would make California Satans arsehole... (sorry Margie) :)
I shall try to smile at your words next time it rains. Oh, its raining now.im not smiling though :)

[BBP]

Hey! take it easy on California buddy! lol

[Lorry]

Only the weather, the people are awesome :)

[Neville]

well it is early in the day & ya probably just off to work and yes.. it probably is pissing down up there, again.. it is here too.. thanks for popping in my little ray of sunshine... and take heed of BBP.. or I'll tell Margie wot ya said...

[BBP]

LOL! Yeah I think ya got it backwards Lorry... most of the people in California are straight out of satan's a*****e... it's the weather here that's damn near perfect! We are just to spoiled so we complain about it anyway :)

[Lorry]

you got every flavour of people there, its the most unique place in the world. Unfortunately, there is gonna be one or two rockets, zoomers and bampots, . Just one or two though :)

[Neville]

gonna do a head count next time I'm in town...

[BBP]

one or two outta three? lol

[Lorry]

An eclectic mix :)

[Neville]

too eclectic mate.. am not well.. off to bed,, night night everybody x

[BBP]

Love the short and sweet here with a nice twist on the rain.

[Neville]

I like short and sweet and the twist makes it taste even better.. bless ya BBP a much appreciated visit and true ... Neville sends his best x

[Stella Armour]

aww... lovely ♥ ................

[Neville]

aww thank you Stella x

[Jade]

sad really, but yet touching. nicely written

[Neville]

Thanks BJ... :)

[Anjeline]

A perfect poem for this time when it's actually raining ( at least in India 😀). I really liked the relation of raindrops with tear drops. Wonderful work 👍

[Neville]

I am delighted... just read your latest too.. bless you my friend...

[Anjeline]

It's my pleasure to read such good poems

[Neville]

......... :) N x