Clearly not singing from the same page, sexually compatible, but mentally divorced springs to mind
Could it ever work, yes on a superficial level, NEVER on the deepest level. One loves deeply, the other doesn't. Mind you there's probably many who can amble along like that. You pick your own poison, I did that once.
You could write a book about these lines you know. There's a lot of meat not showing on the bones of this poem. It's also a sad read.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
you have just written the forward.. now there's only one direction to go innit....cheers for contemp.. read moreyou have just written the forward.. now there's only one direction to go innit....cheers for contemplating these words Chris and ever so... N
I've come back for a second read to get my Neville fix while you are away. This is a fabulous poem. .. read moreI've come back for a second read to get my Neville fix while you are away. This is a fabulous poem. It says so much. On par with Bride of the Hedgerows which is utterly lovely.
She fell in love with my worfs, but ran away from my face. So I sang her a love song and she stabbed her eardrums with kebab skewers. Some women just want it all, looks and personality. I just cant live at that speed :)
But yes, I have been guilty of falling in love with their words too. Its a serious design flaw in writers dna. So easy to do, so hard to forget.
She ran off with anothere guy on here. Woah, wait a minute! :)
Hhhmmm for fear of singing off note? Or reading the lines/notes incorrectly-sadly many never sing the true song of love for fear prevents the truth- touching words , full of meaning and emotion🌹
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
not only thoughts in time.. but a woman of words too... thank you for considering these... N :)
Clearly not singing from the same page, sexually compatible, but mentally divorced springs to mind
Could it ever work, yes on a superficial level, NEVER on the deepest level. One loves deeply, the other doesn't. Mind you there's probably many who can amble along like that. You pick your own poison, I did that once.
You could write a book about these lines you know. There's a lot of meat not showing on the bones of this poem. It's also a sad read.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
you have just written the forward.. now there's only one direction to go innit....cheers for contemp.. read moreyou have just written the forward.. now there's only one direction to go innit....cheers for contemplating these words Chris and ever so... N
I've come back for a second read to get my Neville fix while you are away. This is a fabulous poem. .. read moreI've come back for a second read to get my Neville fix while you are away. This is a fabulous poem. It says so much. On par with Bride of the Hedgerows which is utterly lovely.
Lol...that is the way of it sometimes!!! However I believe you could write a love song my friend, as a matter of fact, this one of many you have offered up. Great stuff!!!
Happy New Year Neville! Your poem is so beautifully sad. The title attracted me immediately and the words captured my heart. Yes, it does happen this way sometimes and I’m sorry the woman didn’t mean her words. Great write!
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5 Years Ago
They are but words, but thank you dear Annette.. you are most kind and a Happy New Year to you & you.. read moreThey are but words, but thank you dear Annette.. you are most kind and a Happy New Year to you & yours..... Neville