Over & Out

just words...

Over & Out

 

It’s over

But you know that

Don’t you

It’s crazy

And I know it

Don’t ya

We just flew

Too fast and blew it

You and me

 

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Sometimes,we just fly too close to the sun and get burnt, or swoop too low to the ground snd end up eating pavement. Either way hurts.
I have said it before, but its worth repeating... How the hell did this dating lark ever catch on? Maybe a truthful advertising slogan could sort us out. Love, guarenteed to f**k you up or your money back!
My sympathies.

[Neville]

smiling here but still spitting out sidewalk... cheers

[Jade]

This is so good and emotional, sometimes we should hang on a while longer

[Neville]

Thank you Brandie Jade.. Neville

[kitty]

Ok, Pick up the pieces and start again - with different plans in mind I'd say here. Dovnt ever give up on love ... that is if it is real/genuine!

[Neville]

Good advice if indeed it is the real thing.... cheers Kitty... I will let them know and get back to ya....:)

[barleygirl]

Some of my best encounters were like these. Lots of people might read this as a bad ending, but for me, it's just the way some bouts of intensity need to end! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Cheers BG and much meant :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes there is a temptation to hang on to something even when you both know it's done

[Neville]

how very true oh wise one.. ta for reminding me... N

[Norman 223]

We've all been there Neville, but after 54 years, the missus and I recognise lucky escapes;-))
Norm.

[Neville]

Good on ya our Norm... many thanks indeed for taking a peek.... Neville

[Frederika]

A lot of emotion in this poem and great rythm

[Neville]

thank you for checking in much appreciated and true ... N

[Ranger Kessel]

Icararus flew. He also fell, but fell in glory. Great read. Thanks for sharing.

[Neville]

thanks for the visit..... cheers indeed.. Neville

[Robert Trakofler]

At least you see it, I usually don't notice these things until i have completely eradicated any sense of her endearment to my being whatsoever. I don't get many (any) christmas cards from previous entanglements!?

[Neville]

Cheers BB....maybe you should leave a forwarding address.. or a PO box might be safer... cheers and a Happy New Year to ya... :)

[Robert Trakofler]

hey i like your picture by the way!!!

[Neville]

its an old one, but it was taken on a New Years Day... cheers tho :)

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting and meaningful poem!

[Neville]

thank you JungLee and a Happy New Year to You..

[NotUsinganymore]

Happy New Year too! It's the year of the boar c:

[Tom]

True what they say, love is blind, fools rush in etc. and inevitably as is the case here, time has proved the only winner in this romance!

Nice one Neville, and a happy new year to you my friend 👨‍🌾

[Neville]

Hey Tom... great to hear from you my friend.. you may not believe me but I was only thinking about you earlier.. I so hope you are back for good... Seasons Best & a very Happy New Year to you and yours.. Neville

[Tom]

Yes Neville, good to know your well and writing in fine style, I do like to pop in and keep in touch with my friends here on Writer's cafe, though sadly, a few no longer around anymore 😪

[Neville]

How very true... I think it must be almost a year perhaps.. I trust all is well your end and that your absence has only been due to the cricket...