Ache

Ache

A Poem by Neville

  Ache

 

                 She took or rather stole

                                   So many things from me

                                                    Although I can’t complain

                                                                    I now ache so very tenderly

© 2018 Neville


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She screwed you well and proper. In fact Lorry has summed it up perfectly. When you love like that you lay yourself wide open. And yet you say you can't complain? That happened to me once, never again. I did a Trumpy. I built walls, ten foot high, six feet wide and four feet deep lol. Your lines left me aching too. You took the hit. I felt it here Neville.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

bless ya friend....



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LOL, I know a girl if you like that sort of thing Neville! Awesome as ever good sir! Come to think of it I know many girls to fulfill that particular need they seem to gravitate to the bunny.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

your reputation precedes ya you bad bunny you...:)
I so often wonder if a man has ever felt this of me...maybe my ex-husband...but he was a supreme narcissist so it would have just been his version. I am glad you allowed yourself to love and learn that deeply Nev.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Any idea how long CQ ...
Gypsy Warrior Queen

5 Years Ago

Oh another 6 weeks before i start physical therapy ..if all goes as planned
Neville

5 Years Ago

cheers.. are ya gonna have a knees up when its all over..
She screwed you well and proper. In fact Lorry has summed it up perfectly. When you love like that you lay yourself wide open. And yet you say you can't complain? That happened to me once, never again. I did a Trumpy. I built walls, ten foot high, six feet wide and four feet deep lol. Your lines left me aching too. You took the hit. I felt it here Neville.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

bless ya friend....
Sympathies my friend. Those aches are what I believe is technically called fucked up. its much fairer to split the pain evenly than one being left with most of it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Now ya tell me... sheeesh... :)

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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