Ache

  Ache

 

                 She took or rather stole

                                   So many things from me

                                                    Although I can’t complain

                                                                    I now ache so very tenderly

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

She screwed you well and proper. In fact Lorry has summed it up perfectly. When you love like that you lay yourself wide open. And yet you say you can't complain? That happened to me once, never again. I did a Trumpy. I built walls, ten foot high, six feet wide and four feet deep lol. Your lines left me aching too. You took the hit. I felt it here Neville.

[Neville]

bless ya friend....

[Einstein Noodle]

damn Neville! poor ol' protagonist .. :( one has to try and sort things out somehow ... sometimes a little sugar coating helps until the wounds are closed enough to move the limb more freely :))))))))))) i am talking about the heart of course ;) intro lines reminds me of "The War of Roses" with Mike Douglas ..i really like your poem ... i like the layout and font boldness .. sort of reflects the powerful emotions that cycloned this poem ..peace on ya bro! seems you have been missing around here lately
E.

[Neville]

Gene my seriously good friend.. you have seriously spoilt me again with your always encouraging review comments... Cheers and many thank you's... Yes mate, I took a break for a while to try and get some inspiration... it didn't work so thought I could come back, keep me noodle down and hope for the best... take care brother & true
N :)

[Stella Armour]

whilst you are aching she is enjoying herself .. so kiss yourself better my friend, put a plaster over it and a big smile .... don't give her your future , she has already spoiled your past :)

[Neville]

what a splendid way of looking at it... thank you Stella N x

[kitty]

Lesson in life, my pet! No regrets over something/someone to 'er call' tenderly. A lot of us have been there! Thanks for the post/read!

[Neville]

some lessons are indeed learned the hard way... thanks for the tip and for the visit to my little scribble... Neville x

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

The softness of the tender ache- deep and sensitive but awakening truths the heart only knows- all happens fir a reason and a season- we live we learn🌹sending healing to tenderly mend where needed🌹

[Neville]

much appreciated thoughts, words and sentiment... I almost feel better already.... N x

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes the pain is worth it, if the cause is something better than the cure.

[Neville]

by Jove, I think she's got it.... cheers my friend and true.. N

[Cherrie]

I say let's write her in your next Who Done It.

[Cherrie]

Just for sport.

[Neville]

you are a naughty girl...my kinda girl it seems...Happy New Year Cherrie N :)

[Cherrie]

Happy New Year Neville
:)

[Mrudula Rani]

These are the words of a forever loving , forgiving heart: Truly beautiful sentiments!
Have a great day my friend.

[Neville]

I feel better after your visit.. thank you M... and a great one to you too x

[Mrudula Rani]

It is entirely my pleasure my friend.

[Neville]

thank you again M... I have just got back having been away for a short holiday.. hope you are well x

[Mrudula Rani]

I hope you had great holidays, and now ready to share your brilliant poetry, Neville.

[Neville]

we shall have to see my friend.. the break did me good though.... N :)

[Mrudula Rani]

That's great, I am glad my holidays are over they were exhausting.... but, carnival is around the bend.( more holidays🙄)!

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice poem. I feel like all of us have had our hearts broken by anyone including parents and siblings.

[Neville]

you may be write...thank you for considering these words..

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Your words are filled with a kind of resentment, possibly sadness. Your poems express how much you miss this woman. I say find her and express your feelings to her before it's too late. Go for it!

[Neville]

thank you again my friend.. a much appreciated visit and true...

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Well, as the holidays approach, people have a tendency to go into the depressive state. You should call her.

[Neville]

Happy New Year x

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Happy New Year to you as well.

[barleygirl]

I recognize the persistent ache
an aftertaste of sweet sips I take
lingering long after each beefcake
uninhibited craving that I can't shake . . .
*sigh!* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

cheers Margie... nug nug.... :)