Before Breakfast

Sometimes a full English just aint enough, is it... :)

Before Breakfast

 

You left a taste

of you

In my beard last evening

 

And

 

On my very word

You did taste good again

Pon waking

 

 

Author's Note

I like my bacon crisp and my eggs runny.. and on my toast I like both marmalade & honey ... not on the same slice tho ...... N

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh you devil you! your just all about eating this morning aren't you :) your poem makes a good cake.. i mean case .. for beard growing ... "Pon waking" ... must have been some very fine dreams .. great bit of fun in reading sir .. thanks for sharing ...
E.
ps. you can keep the beard to yourself tho

[Neville]

am not sure whether this one will last.. cheers Gene and seasons best x

[Einstein Noodle]

same to you Neville

[Neville]

............:) cheers N

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i like this poem it leaves a lot to the readers imagination.
very good enjoyed it

[Neville]

thank you my friend.. much appreciated.. N :)

[lightsong]

:) BLUSH* well yes, this is a poem that makes a woman blush, softly, deeply smile and be happy as a morning flower can be, this is the passion that is spoken in a way only the senses can feel and understand, and oh Neville, I adore this, totally ravishing to me...

[Neville]

we call that a win win..... aint we both lucky.. :)

[lightsong]

I believe we both are :) :)

[Neville]

........:) N

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Well well I thought it was just my morning pain meds that had me looking for a taste...nah it was just the perception of Nev! LOl

[Neville]

keep taking them pills.. I will be there and back before ya know it LOL.... hope you are feeling better CQ

[Robert Trakofler]

got no words, you jack slapped me again! I hope i don't meet you in a bar the term c**k block comes to mind you vile creature! I have to work for my breakfast

[Neville]

poor thing

[Chris Shaw]

How lovely, a romantic poem and before breakfast as well. Sensual, erotic even. Now that should put a smile on any bearded man's face. Who needs bacon and eggs after that?

Chris

[Neville]

I never say no to B&E.. I'm a hard man remember... ta our Chris x

[Chris Shaw]

Ah are you part of the never make love on an empty stomach brigade? Get that bacon and eggs eaten :)

[Neville]

before is absolutely fine... during can be fun too but after... well ya just got more time to focus.. aint'cha :)

[barleygirl]

You've perfectly captured one of my favorite aftertastes . . . gotta love those whisker scents . . . amazing how such a teensy concept can deliver such a solid thump *yow!* (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

those after aftertastes are something else aren't they just, whether in the hair, on clothes, bed linen, or elsewhere, you just gotta breathe deep.. . this is one of my scratch and sniff posts Margie.. bless you my friend and Seasons Best nug nug xx

[Ken Simm.]

Yep, got me agreeing with that. Ah the memories. Makes you not want to bathe don't it.
The fragrance of my beard and the sea. Sounds like a love poem by Eliot. Love it and the poem.

[Neville]

I just got waved by the sea Ken and yes.. I taste what you mean...thank you for considering this little scribble, tis much appreciated.. Seasons Greetings and all the very best for the New Year.. N

[Mrudula Rani]

I agree with you... one language is never sufficient to express a universe of emotions you shared with the loved one! .... but Neville dear, you can manage to put a whole world of sensual feelings in few amazing words !!!

[Neville]

Bless ya M.. as indeed you can and have done and shall again.... N :) x

[Mrudula Rani]

You are the romantic poet of WC, Neville. And your poems create wonderful feeling as well!

[Neville]

oh' if only.... I think that is what all writers would wish... but of course, flattery will get you everywhere.... :) x

[Mrudula Rani]

With you I am always honest, my friend .

[Neville]

then you can have anything ya fancy :) x

[Mrudula Rani]

just for that , sending you lots of hugs.

[Neville]

bless you M have one back plus a x