A Thirst Well Quenched

when ya can't spit it out, but ya can't swallow it either..

A Thirst Well Quenched

 

A thirst

Well quenched

A sorrow drowned

When the words I seek

Go round and round and round

 

When silence

Says it louder than

Any other shouted sound

I don’t want to say I love you

But something else far more profound

 

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Gentle touch, or even more dramatic, still sensual... a soft kiss! I they speak a ton in volume and convey more than I love you
Dear Neville, you are truly an irresistible romantic, your wonderful words paint pictures of love in all the brightest colours possible .

[Neville]

you colour me so well my friend bless ya and true... N

[Mrudula Rani]

I often feel your poems are profound, and my comments don't do right by them ... and will be thinking about them for a long while; you are truly a gifted writer my friend.

[Neville]

I have never known your comments to be anything other than positively encouraging, well thought through, warm and very moving.. dont ever change and I do mean that with my hand on my hear, I do x

[Mrudula Rani]

I cherish our friendship and congratulate myself for having you here on WC. Você é uma amor Neville! Obrigada.

[Neville]

I too cherish our friendship and congratulate myself for having you here on WC. Você é uma amor Mrudula! Obrigada x

[lightsong]

I LOVE this so much so dear Neville!! believe me You better "do" than to "speak" she will know it by actions not by words, and believe me if You say but You ignore her and do nothing, she will be hurt deeply, so deep... this is a gentle tender loving little gem!

[Neville]

wow.. maybe I had better do as I am told.. thank you so much for this visit dear Light :) N

[Ardra]

Ah ..... if silence could convey the love shared what more could one ask for....even if there is no need to say those words....sometimes really lucky ones get to experience this kind of silence.... wonderfully captured N. :))

[Neville]

how luverly is that thought.. and thank you for being so kind.. N

[Coyote Poetry]

I search for profound words. Sometime silence is better. New world. I love you, became a dirty word. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

thank you for leaving such an amazing review comment Coyote... Seasons Best my brother.. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

What beautiful words with such depth of meaning Neville. Love and friendship combined here and conveyed so very well.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you our Chris tis hot of ye olde press x

[Chris Shaw]

Ye old press is on fire Neville (metaphorically speaking of course). Lovely lines x

[Neville]

Thanks Chris & loads of em x

[Chris Shaw]

:)................

[Neville]

and more....... :)