A Thirst Well Quenched

A Thirst Well Quenched

A Poem by Neville
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when ya can't spit it out, but ya can't swallow it either..

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A Thirst Well Quenched

 

A thirst

Well quenched

A sorrow drowned

When the words I seek

Go round and round and round

 

When silence

Says it louder than

Any other shouted sound

I don’t want to say I love you

But something else far more profound

 

© 2018 Neville


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Gentle touch, or even more dramatic, still sensual... a soft kiss! I they speak a ton in volume and convey more than I love you
Dear Neville, you are truly an irresistible romantic, your wonderful words paint pictures of love in all the brightest colours possible .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

I have never known your comments to be anything other than positively encouraging, well thought thro.. read more
Mrudula Rani

6 Years Ago

I cherish our friendship and congratulate myself for having you here on WC. Você é uma amor Nevil.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

I too cherish our friendship and congratulate myself for having you here on WC. Você é uma amor Mr.. read more



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What is more Profound than love... perhaps
flying to the Moon and back... gently, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


nah' it dont come close ... but I thank you bigly and true Pat :)
I love that ending. In fact I love all of it. The build up and the denouement. Dare I say classic?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago



.. Go on, I double dare ya .. but before you do, I just wanna say thanks a bloomin l.. read more
well done Nev! well done indeed ... one for the books says i!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

no kidding! well ... i did speed read down the contents ... looking for an "A" ... there are a few ... read more
Neville

3 Years Ago


The Ford sounds amazing .. a good find methinks not many of them about these days I imagine .. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

i would have sent you mine brother .. in the past a Harley over the pond (can't believe i said that).. read more
I know precisely how this feels. It's something I experience fairly regularly here at the cafe, altho it's the fault of nobody. And I'll admit . . . I've been known to intentionally dally in these sensations from time to time . . . and when I do . . . wooooo-weeeee! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

am just a little bit lost for words BG but thank you deeply... Neville
Silence can be deafening.
I love your word choices.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Bless ya my dear friend and may I say you look lovely Cherrie... Seasons Best x
I love the idea of something more profound. And the best thing is there is no knowing what that thing is. The line between poetry and living.

I really enjoyed this. Bounds of meaning in a compact package.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

cheers... many thanks indeed .............
I'll drink to that! Seriously give me a glass the amount of information you squeeze into so few lines is wonderful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

My cup runneth over.. many thank you's sir... N
The simplicity can be complex. But sometimes the simple things is all that is needed.
I like this poem. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

I like that you stopped to consider it, thank you.. Neville
Sometimes I love you isn't enough but you aren't sure what words to use ... beautifully done, my friend, but I wouldn't be me if I didn't at least inquire as to the purpose of the apostrophe in say's. Maybe it's possessing something I don't see.:) don't hate me ...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Nope, I need to thank thee.. I thank thee :)
I agree to your last two lines here. There are so many ways of expressing love than just a simple I love you ;P but maybe we seek the easier way out. lol
Enjoyed reading this one, N. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

thanks my friend.. some of us surely do.. dont make that mistake again x

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