Silly Pickle

Silly Pickle

A Poem by Neville
"

I much prefer New Year

"

Silly Pickle

 

I am a silly pickle

I forgot to laugh or giggle

When the Christmas tree exploded

Just like that

All the presents they were smoking

As my mum and dad sat joking

And the fairy slowly melted on the mat

 

 

 


© 2018 Neville


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I'm a New Year person as well Neville. As soon as I read "just like that", I had this wonderful image of Tommy Cooper, complete with his toothy grin and red fez. Mind you if that happened to me as a kid, I'd be finding it a bit difficult to see the funny side of it even though mum and dad were laughing. Poor plastic fairy. Entertaining read Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

They will probably taste a bit gritty, a few grains of sand maybe :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

will let ya know :)
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

:))....................



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Though this has been a right trying year and I have no problems with it being over, with me on the mend! I still love the feel of Christmas. The feeling that miracles never die. The warmth of coming together...the hope that Christmas brings. I guess it really is time for a new tree.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Good luck on Thursday and with the rehab/recovery :)
Gypsy Warrior Queen

5 Years Ago

Y'all are my recovery...the rehab will come later when they wean me off of the love :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

that aint gonna happen..
I'm a New Year person as well Neville. As soon as I read "just like that", I had this wonderful image of Tommy Cooper, complete with his toothy grin and red fez. Mind you if that happened to me as a kid, I'd be finding it a bit difficult to see the funny side of it even though mum and dad were laughing. Poor plastic fairy. Entertaining read Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

They will probably taste a bit gritty, a few grains of sand maybe :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

will let ya know :)
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

:))....................

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