Rainbow

Tis a Haiku true enough....

Rainbow

 

The shadow of a rainbow

Multi hued arcs bright

Crossing fields of hope with light

 

Author's Note

gotta dream don'tcha .....

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There's something about rainbows that make a seeing, feeling person, feel special. It's like a a privilege given, shared from and by the heavens, free, often completely unexpected. To see and wonder as it preens self then slowly, slowly disappears, leaves a feeling of... wonder, fascination, gratitude.

That only three lines of perfectly laid words can remind me of how wondrous rainbows are is a true gift for today so near to.. a special date is.. special. Thank you.

[Neville]

it seems they are the source of much delight wherever & whenever they appear..I often think if they were the other way round, they would look like a multicoloured smile.. Here's one in monochrome for you :) N

[emmajoy]

Sometimes the plainest is the most beautiful!

[Mrudula Rani]

Rainbows are the bridges of hope to land of dreams, aren't they. Your Haiku is perfect and beautiful.

[Neville]

yes they are indeed.. thank you my very dear M... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

You are welcome meu Querido.

[Neville]

.......... :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, I've always loved rainbows than the rain, and it certainly gives this kinda inexplicable hopeful feeling to me...it ain't half bad to dream, esp with a rainbow around ;)
Lovely piece of haiku, N. :))

[Neville]

thank you so much :) N x

[andrew mitchell]

When you find that pot of gold let me know! Nice haiku format Nev.

[Neville]

haiku my friend, very kind of ya... and yes.. no prob... N

[Papaya]

gotta dream
a rainbow always feels like a gift and it's easy to dream when you see such magic

[Neville]

wow.. thank you so very much my friend :)

[lightsong]

You captured the wonder of the rainbow in these three lines, one light spread with multi hued arcs gifting gentle fresh hope to this earth, to our spirits, now think of it as the son of Sun and Rain. lovely one my friend.

[Neville]

a most welcome visit and true.. thank you so much my friend.. N

[Lorry]

Nicely captured Neville, but a question remains unanswered yhat puzzles me, did you sing a rainbow, sing a rainbow... :)

[Neville]

No.. I Bungled it...so left it to Zippy..

[Lorry]

what about dippy George? :)

[Neville]

yeah, he was there with Geoffrey....

[Lorry]

Never trusted him with that mad pudding bowl haircut. My, my cynicism started earlier than I thought :)

[Neville]

I heard Zippy, George & Bungle are now orphans... :(

[Chris Shaw]

This is lovely Neville, so much imagery here. Of course we have to have our dreams and you know that don'tcha?Saw a lovey rainbow, only the other day. It was a beaut. I don't see many, so it always makes me pause and reflect at the wonder of them, when they appear.

Chris

[Neville]

I think we all marvel at them Chris and maybe always will.. thank you for the view.. N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, gotta dream...and this is a beautifully written signal to do just that.

[Neville]

How bloomin kind.. I did not have to try at all to smile jacob, me face did it of its own accord :)

[sette]

and at the end of a rainbow will always be a ray of hope

[Neville]

Let's hope so.... thank you sette.. :)

[angel]

The rainbow.Before the flood in Noah's day, it had never rained before. After the downpour, God caused a rainbow to appear in the sky, and He told Noah that He would never again wipe out all the life on Earth with another flood.
Comforting to those with a fear of water, but then you have to wonder...what's the alternative?
Nice piece of work, Neville. Short, sweet, and lovely.

[Neville]

short, sweet and lovely.. sounds like me mam angel.. but good enough for me.... a delightful comment, I might add.... N x

[angel]

My pleasure, dear sir!

[Neville]

thank you my friend..