I think the word therapeutic comes to mind for this one Neville, but what a brilliant last line, taking us back to the title. I was wondering if it, the title, would make an appearance, but it was still a surprise how you done it.
Now, perhaps I need some primal screaming therapy in my next write |:)
I must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cath.. read moreI must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cathartic don't ya think...cheers mate..
6 Years Ago
I certainly do. I usually have mine in the morning, pre coffee. Get it out of the way early :)
dear Neville... there is so much truth in your wisdom. Cooling down is a brilliant way to describe aging. So kind of you to pen a letter to her memory and even leave good omens in a locket. Yes, I have had a few biopsies... some positive, but chemo and radiation sometimes bring remission... not to mention... Miracles.
Aging is a gift when you consider the alternative. May your days be blessed with bird song and the hope of Spring. truly, Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
said it before and am gonna say it again.. bless you Pat.. may your days be blessed similarly... Nev.. read moresaid it before and am gonna say it again.. bless you Pat.. may your days be blessed similarly... Neville
I hope this is just for art's sake and not accurate concerning your real life, my dear friend. It bothers me to think that anyone would break your dear and gentle heart. Shame upon anyone who would.
If you have no real love, may you find it soon. The lucky woman will be getting a real winning jackpot!
You, my friend, are one of the great ones.
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Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
an ewe z 1 odd D burst gallz 2..... cheers angel, IOU... N x
wise words my friend, for which I am grateful.. many tomorrows of course have happened since 2005 an.. read morewise words my friend, for which I am grateful.. many tomorrows of course have happened since 2005 and so I can laugh about certain historical events without any trouble at all....ps.. well earned indeed... peace and all good things to ya Cherrie... N
Oh dear Neville - this must be all too familiar to many. Moving on is the best plan in the long run but it is hard to erase the memories. You've done this in a very conversational way which connects with us very easily. I have done a few things in free verse here (usually when I'm high!) and taken a bit of stick but if it works run with it. Some folk are just too tight ar*****! There are a couple of things to think about - where and if to use capitals and then where to break to the next line. I think the main considerations are, to preserve the sense and maintain a flow that is pleasing to the ear.
Nice work Neville!
Cheers
Alan
wow, what a snap
cooling down, I love the context in which you have used this!
great poem
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
sometimes it just has to be said.... so here goes, I'm gonna say it now, thank you my friend for the.. read moresometimes it just has to be said.... so here goes, I'm gonna say it now, thank you my friend for the visit...
6 Years Ago
you're welcome.
here, have an h...
6 Years Ago
How very kind, now I've got a spare... Hey, have a p on me... :)
This is the kind of exquisite rant I used to enjoy in my younger days, before I learned that such wanton releases often come back to haunt! *wink! wink!* You have truly surpassed me in every regard, however, as far as spewing the most incendiary venom here! I hereby vow never to make you mad (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
NUGs are always welcome tho &... I always do unto others.....fondly N
Good morning Neville. I hope you are feeling better now you've got this off your chest. Could be taken for a matrimonial, I've had a few of those. 2005 didn't look that good. Sending you very warm wishes after reading your Cooling Down poem.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Warm wishes much appreciated... these words reflect feelings associated with a betrayal that at the .. read moreWarm wishes much appreciated... these words reflect feelings associated with a betrayal that at the time upset me no end...
6 Years Ago
Betrayals are the pits. Funny how you can forgive them, but you don't ever forget the misery and pai.. read moreBetrayals are the pits. Funny how you can forgive them, but you don't ever forget the misery and pain they inflict. Rock the boat don'"t they? I've always been a fair weather sailor myself.
6 Years Ago
funny thing is, I only found this earlier in my box of words and realised that it was originally pen.. read morefunny thing is, I only found this earlier in my box of words and realised that it was originally penned on 5th November 2005... how strange is that... now just waiting to receive a telegram ... a bit heavy, so sorry.... N
I've come back to this Neville because I didn't give you the credit your rant deserved. Maybe becaus.. read moreI've come back to this Neville because I didn't give you the credit your rant deserved. Maybe because it punched hard, was close to home and made me realise I have never written anything so revealing. I just want to tell you it was a brilliant bit of writing. I don't know whether you wrote this off the cuff or whether you laboured on it. To me it came across as off the cuff, totally realistic, powerful and deservedly hard hitting. I wouldn't have wanted to be on the receiving end. I think it would have rendered me speechless. Kudos.
Chris
6 Years Ago
You are so very kind and thoughtful Chris.. I can't recall whether these words took time or were mor.. read moreYou are so very kind and thoughtful Chris.. I can't recall whether these words took time or were more spontaneous it is quite a while back now.. I rarely write anything when angry, which actually only occurs very occasionally... thanks again for the second peek.. there really was nothing or ya to worry over.... got the dentist in an hour.. have a good un chuck... N