I think the word therapeutic comes to mind for this one Neville, but what a brilliant last line, taking us back to the title. I was wondering if it, the title, would make an appearance, but it was still a surprise how you done it.
Now, perhaps I need some primal screaming therapy in my next write |:)
I must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cath.. read moreI must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cathartic don't ya think...cheers mate..
5 Years Ago
I certainly do. I usually have mine in the morning, pre coffee. Get it out of the way early :)
just like what difference pain does to enjoy life to the fullest had been a parody of sorts but as one ages not numerically but in wisdom there is a deeper understanding of why everything has to happen
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Bless you my friend.. many thanks indeed for checking in .. I hope you are both safe and wel.. read more
Bless you my friend.. many thanks indeed for checking in .. I hope you are both safe and well :)
Outing with deeper feelings which need to be said puts this write where hopefully it did most good - i.e. to the rather selfish demeanor of its recipient - - things can clear then for honesty to make itself felt. A really good read which I am glad that I caught Nev........... x
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... I am so bloomin glad you caught it too dear Fay... ta'ly dearly n truly tooly :)
dear Neville... cooling down is a good omen... we can only
hope that when we are cool under a shady bough... we will
remember how bothersome it was to be hot. Seriously, your
poetry is unusually profound. truly, Pat
and you my dear friend are unusually kind... thank you for throwing some light on this oldie and bre.. read moreand you my dear friend are unusually kind... thank you for throwing some light on this oldie and breathing some fresh air into it..... Neville x
5 Years Ago
you are welcome... enjoy the summers warmth... Pat
I think the word therapeutic comes to mind for this one Neville, but what a brilliant last line, taking us back to the title. I was wondering if it, the title, would make an appearance, but it was still a surprise how you done it.
Now, perhaps I need some primal screaming therapy in my next write |:)
I must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cath.. read moreI must confess, I felt a whole lot better once I got everything off me chest, a good rant is so cathartic don't ya think...cheers mate..
5 Years Ago
I certainly do. I usually have mine in the morning, pre coffee. Get it out of the way early :)
How kind you are as always M... I've just started the countdown to see if you are write.... AGT's.... read moreHow kind you are as always M... I've just started the countdown to see if you are write.... AGT's.. N
5 Years Ago
I will be waiting for you to post it again in 2028! Tudo de bom ( all the best)!
5 Years Ago
that's a date then, & you know I'm gonna check dont ya...
This really made me smile, Neville, because I have a twisted sense of humor, not because it's funny! I love the acid=soaked words, the pervading sense of bitterness and the venomous directness! I love the metaphor, too - she may be 'cooling down', but your ire certainly is not! So I am sorry I smiled, my friend, because I can feel your pain throughout this poem, but I just could not resist the dose of pure vitriole so eloquently expressed. A masterpiece of its kind! Kudos!
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5 Years Ago
no problem, very kind of ya in fact, cheers my friend... N
Your detectors are seemingly intact... thank you Eva, a most welcome and much appreciated visit... N.. read moreYour detectors are seemingly intact... thank you Eva, a most welcome and much appreciated visit... Neville
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Detectors Neville? I would hope so for a psychic medium. Lol ...I will read your others when I have.. read moreDetectors Neville? I would hope so for a psychic medium. Lol ...I will read your others when I have an hour to spare x
I couldn't help but smile while reading. 'The world does not revolve around you or your alter ego' - something which I've been told too often haha ;P
It's kinda delusional of anyone to think they'd be remaining hot forever btw, so I hope you sent this one their way too although that might not cool them down lol
Cool piece of writing, Neville.
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5 Years Ago
some folk wouldn't recognise themselves if it had their name in the title and in the credits... glad.. read moresome folk wouldn't recognise themselves if it had their name in the title and in the credits... glad to say tho, in this case.. they did get the message... cool is the new hot.. cheers me good friend... N
Smiling an evil smile here, Neville....seems you can write a good vent too! :) The angrier we are at a person, the uglier they seem...and the less sexy. She may never realize she was wrong and you were right, but you know...and your opinion is the one that counts if you ask me. Very good writing here. Lydi**
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5 Years Ago
am smiling a happy smile here & sending both my thanks and a little x
Hi Neville!
2005 seems a long way now! Time sutures and seals the gaps and just a faint, hairline scar remains. I’m glad you had written it down at the time and we could get to read such a clear, compelling flow of emotions. Life isn’t fair my friend and those who hurt us often go on to be very happy with little or no guilt. I usually fret for a time and then move on, letting Almighty decide their fate. Kudos for the heartfelt writing!
many lifetimes ago in the great scheme of things.. and yes.. some of those faint scars are now so fa.. read moremany lifetimes ago in the great scheme of things.. and yes.. some of those faint scars are now so faint, one hardly even knows they are there.... Bless ya D.... Neville
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I’m glad for your healing! It’s great to be able to look back and reflect on the past with a smi.. read moreI’m glad for your healing! It’s great to be able to look back and reflect on the past with a smile :)