Before I Go

Before I Go

A Poem by Neville
"

what started out as a haiku ended up as four identically worded but differently arranged sets of words on the same otherwise empty page.. we call this a quadhaiknev and if ya believe that.....

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Before I go

I want you

 

So please

Promise me

 

The next time

I can have you

 

 


Before I go I want you

So please promise me

The next time I can have you

 

 

Before

I

Go

I

Want

You

So

Please

Promise

Me

The

Next

Time

I

Can

Have

You

 

Before I go, I want you, so please, promise me, the next time, I can have you

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
ya could call it experimental, I call it messing with words... aint it wot we do...

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I like this....crafty, clever and a little desperate, just how I like my women...lol!!! Look at you getting all artsy and craftsy, this worked out really well. Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

cheers mate, but what you after eh' ... :) N
Aw Nev...you sly dog you...messing with words...pfft...messing with emotions...now there is a motive!>
You heart stealin' mind messer!(smiles..wink)

Ps.( there was no potential mind messin' heart stealin' harm with the writing of this comment )

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

okay.. so bring on the bread
Gypsy Warrior Queen

6 Years Ago

oops! I ate it :):):):):):):):):):):):):):0
Neville

6 Years Ago

I aint pitta...........

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Added on October 2, 2018
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..

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