Lucy in Disguise

Lucy in Disguise

A Poem by Neville
"

when ya can't see whats in front of ya, maybe its because your eyes are closed...

"

Lucy in Disguise

 

Lucy

In disguise

Hides behind

Designer shades and

Her too numerous Tattoos

 

What 

You see may

 Not be what you want

Or what you might well get

Since camouflage, deceit and

Creosote are specials on her menu du jour 

© 2018 Neville


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Your title is a delightful twist on an epic song! Your details of the "perfectly-made-up" woman are too true. I marvel at those who are so determined to plaster over their natural beauty in every way possible. But I never made the connection about how a person in camouflage like that might well also be an imposter on the emotional level! Expansive tattoos are such a waste of lovely skin! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You got it...ha.. make my day why dont'cha.. cheers Margie... yep.. luv da skin ya born in.... N x
So many Lucys in the world. Ironical when they try and pass value judgments from their shaky ground as fake, wanton women.

The upside is, that they are always found out. No matter how hard they try. At the end, it gives everyone a good laugh. At their expense.

A strong write, Neville.

Best,
M.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you M............Here's to a good laugh then .. cheers... N
Certain berries and mushrooms are quite beautiful, yet deadly to eat. How easily some of us are made fools. (Dead fools) In this case, however, her tattoos would turn me away.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Samuel for checking these words over for me, and of course for the tip....Stay well and wr.. read more
There is so much that good pancake, glitzy shades and heavy lashes can camouflage! It just adds to the intrigue, well at least till they are found out. Loved it Neville!

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Divya, I assure you, your visit here is much appreciated... Neville
Wow, last two lines paint a sorry picture.

Since camouflage, deceit and
Creosote are specials on her menu du jour

Never been a fan of caked on camouflage, or anything else fake. Deceit thrown in for added measure ? - nah, best walk on by I say. Morning Neville, kettles on. Luvverly day.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Chris, many thanks and of course I agree entirely.. can't even remember where these words .. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

And to you too :))
You just know guys are flocking into Lucy's web.
They may think they're getting lucky.
But once they're in, they're not getting out.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

She sure did get around.. it was those hidden preservatives did it for me.. cheers Paul.. N

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Added on September 24, 2018
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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