Nice work Neville a contract it is and lucky its not a hit contract! A fine write!
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you Andrew, a much appreciated visit & a most welcome comment.. now if you would just care to .. read moreThank you Andrew, a much appreciated visit & a most welcome comment.. now if you would just care to sign on the dotted line........ :)
excellent metaphor here....will you keep me in your heart, will i keep you in mine...do we have an agreement? a contract?
or is this just another fleeting agreement, like a bad business proposal.
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Is this for real, or is this just fantasy, caught in a landslide, no escape from insanity.... Thank .. read moreIs this for real, or is this just fantasy, caught in a landslide, no escape from insanity.... Thank you jacob my friend.. I so much enjoy each different take on these words.. it never ceases to amaze me how we each see things both differently and in similar ways... Cheers, Neville
I love the decisive tone you use here, Neville, it’s so effective. While the course of love is best left mostly uncharted, there are times when we need more to go by, even if just for momentary assurance. Well said!
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
How kind is that.. very.. and so, I very much thank you, dear Divya.......... Neville
Wow, this comes across like a contract and it's clever. Appears very polite and also very considerate. Would this be an old one out for an airing or a brand new piece of work? I am left smiling and thinking how many copies of this has he printed off (lol). Always interesting writes Neville.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
This one has been kicking around for quite some time Chris, or rather lounging in a box in me study... read moreThis one has been kicking around for quite some time Chris, or rather lounging in a box in me study... ta for checking it over for me.... Neville
Well, I propose you remember anything I say or do. Not necessarily because it will have a significant imact on your life or well being, but it will allow me to tick your name off my sheet of people I have deposited useless information into. Now, if that sounds sexual in nature it is supposed to. Because those types of encounters are easier to remember whether you want to or not....just sayin'. Lol...this was a very ingenious piece of writing Neville...
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
ooh' I have just come over all unnecessary.. ta Crowley my fine friend and poet.. a much appreciated.. read moreooh' I have just come over all unnecessary.. ta Crowley my fine friend and poet.. a much appreciated visit.... Neville
This is really good. I love the fierce quiet intensity. Don't we all feel this way sometimes? Like there's a "safe space" dividing us somewhat? This reminds me of "back in the old days" when we would stay up all night & pour out every thought we ever thunk, as if it was all so important & pertinent. Now things go unsaid due to lack of . . . I don't know what . . . interest? enthusiasm? We're all floating in a thick gel that only gives the illusion of closeness *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Being kind to me will get you everywhere... indecent proposal or what.... answers on a postcard plea.. read moreBeing kind to me will get you everywhere... indecent proposal or what.... answers on a postcard please.. Cheers Margie... Neville
'Familiar strangers' - I like that. It's funny how often we end up being that...
Interesting write. If everyone thought it through just like here before really proposing lol
A very decent proposal I must say Neville. You eloquently write what we think when broaching the possibility , the risk, the vulnerability of a new relationship. It reads so formally but feels so tenuous and tentative- you convey the fear of rejection so uniquely and so well. An excellent write my friend.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Why bless you Annette, how very kind.. they are just words tho.... N x