The Noises She Made

The Noises She Made

A Poem by Neville
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Just a bit of fun here folks... my imagination got taken over by my pen.....toot toot is the noise an owl with a head cold and blocked nose might make... it is also a street name for cocaine....

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The Noises She Made

When he gave her his breath
she went toot toot toot
Since she was more of a tuba
and much less of a flute

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Have a laugh.. ya got to every now and again ya know.... N

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Cant play a tuba or trumpet > I just get Th Th TH
I made flutes go peep peeep

I'd much rather bang a drum boom boom boom

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

many thanks my friend... bang on ...... Neville
Wild Rose

6 Years Ago

I like a laugh now and again

A laugh a day keeps the blues away
Neville

6 Years Ago

it does indeed.. thanks again.. Neville
I think I have known a few tubas in my time, but few flutes. :)
Glad I stopped by today for this one, definitely a good start to a Friday.:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

you are far too kind my friend.. I'm glad you popped in though too... Neville
I know of several who're more tuba than flutes lol
This was kinda informative on my part btw ;)
Cool write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Yeah.......toot toot and all that jazz... Many thanks too of course..... Neville x
Haha - I think perhaps I am a tuba too 😬

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

tuba or not tuba, now that is the question... bless ya KWP......... much appreciated here and always.. read more
Then why do I think of Weather Report? Is it because of that superb tune A Remark you Made?
I love this piece of whimsy Neville.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

and I so very much appreciate you taking a squint my friend..... N
You are full of enigma with this one . . . had to consider a number of possibilities . . . but after all, I landed on the idea that you're just plum nuts, that's all! *wink! wink!* I love the way your "toot toot" is a double entendre *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You may well be write Margie... I bet at least one or two of those possibilities you considered, cam.. read more
I certainly did laugh! Short sweet and hard to beat! The question is did you play her or did you play her well?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

well........... now that is indeed the question.. don't we all think we can sing well in the shower... read more
Your imagination has just gone awol with this one Neville. Not even gonna try and work it out :))

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

ah; but did ya grin or grimace Chris, now that is da question........ N
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Always a smile for you Neville :))
Neville

6 Years Ago

then my cup runneth over & I am quite utterly replete..... :))
I was thinking something else. Thanks for the explanation. In all seriousness the best thing is a partner who acknowledges you are human and moves on. We are a bit yucky at times. Just how we're made. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You obviously have a very dirty mind... or maybe just a very keen ear... whatever the case, your vis.. read more
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

Before this degenerates, I will say I was thinking something else else
Neville

6 Years Ago

something else else sounds very intestinal... but hey.. something else also sounds even more compell.. read more

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