Versal Law

and now for something a bit different, 'versal' being my very newest neologism... no prizes for guessing.....

Versal Law

 

You whisper soft

And 

Your words

Become lessons

You write words

And

They become law…

As

We make love

Our

Bodies merge

As one 

With heaven

Tis a perfectly 

Natural versal law…….

 

Author's Note

bring it on...........

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Breathing beautiful words that demonstrate undying love.

[Neville]

Many thank you's Dawn.... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

Verse me till I can't breathe
Verse me till I can't see
Verse me till I melt
Into your
Law ...
:):) ....

[Neville]

Now wouldn't that be a fine thing..... Cheers my dear Friend and true......... Neville

[lightsong]

first I want a prize if I guess it right lol just kidding, but to be honest, I don't want to guess anything, just to enjoy this gorgeous poem my friend, I don't know how You did it with these few lines, but You took my breath with its beautiful passion, and made me think "women rule!" lol very beautiful and creative too.

[Neville]

You really are too kind my very dear Friend and you are right too... Women do indeed rule the world.. At least my world...... Neville

[lightsong]

You deserve a really big praise to this little poetic gem, believe me :)

[Neville]

...... smiling from ear to ear and here to there... N

[lightsong]

that's a REALLY big smile, but what's better than that? from here to there I'm smiling with You 😆

[Neville]

..........:)