Out of Luck

Out of Luck

A Poem by Neville

Out of Luck

 

Knowing

My luck

Even in another

World and time

And even

Under entirely different

Circumstances

 

I bet my

Life would be

Precisely  

As it is

Today

Some wise guy

Called it karma

 

© 2018 Neville


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That's the trouble with philosophy,. Nevillle Personally, I'd call it pessimism. But I seem to remember the final line from an old musical . " Being miserable's gonna be fun".

Norm




Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Pessimism might well be the in thing Norm.. keep our fingers crossed eh.. we might one day be though.. read more
Norman 223

6 Years Ago

I know all about trusses,Neville. I even wrote a poem about it called The Chronicles of Hernia.. read more
Karma. Luck. Destiny. Concepts we wrap ourselves in to explain why things are the way the are. What ifs are impossibilities we cannot fathom. As always, nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

I am delighted you popped in Lyn, much appreciated.... Neville
The thing I love the most about your message is the hidden suggestion that we should just “let go” & stop trying to finagle life so much, maybe loosen up & go on gut feel more often. We humans always think we have more control than we do (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You really are on form today, but then aint ya always my dear friend, gonna call you lil miss percep.. read more
Old cliche if it wasn't for bad luck I would have no luck at all.. And bad luck I have, I can't even win on a scratch off lottery ticket... Thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You are gonna be surprised one of these fine days my friend, I can feel it in my water...... cheers,.. read more
You've nailed it dear Neville! what a piece spoken totally to me!

we make our own karma, some wise girl says ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

How very kind of you my friend, thank you for visiting.... Neville
what comes around goes around and vice versa, it is a good realization to make

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

If you fail to realise it, it aint hit you in the face hard enough yet.... thank you sette..... Nevi.. read more
I am feeling that right with you Neville. We have just buried our cat of ten years. Full garden ceremony, candles and roses. Some b*****d speeding after yesterdays football no doubt caught him at twelve last night. That karma thingy, I often think I must have been a right cow in a previous life and I'm paying for it now. Wishing you good luck Neville always.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Oh no.. I am so sorry to hear your news Chris, I truly am.... and bless you too for the kind thought.. read more
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Gee
And when the only luck ya get is bad luck ya know you must have been a bad un in a previous life or lives. Reincarnated to rue each day, hmmmm
Hi Nev, hope all is well in the luckless West

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Cheers Gee, yep must have been very naughty or summat... not too bad here...... wot about MK's N
Gee

6 Years Ago

All is well thanks
Neville

6 Years Ago

Good to know..........Neville

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