Bex World

Bex World

A Poem by Neville
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originally writ for my daughter Bex over 20 years ago now

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Bex World

 

I want your world

To be full of nice things

Soft fluffy bunnies

And diamonds and rings

 

Every day to be filled

With buckets and spades

Over-flowing with flowers

Sea shells and warm sunny days

 

Imagine a world

Where all nice dreams come true

This is the world

That I want for you

 

Bouncy castles, heroes, princes and kings

Perfect blue skies

And sea-sidey things

 

No nettles or wasps

Or things that might sting

No splinters or teardrops

Or any such thing

 

© 2018 Neville


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Only the best for our little ones. Well yours not so little any more. :) Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Bless ya, my pleasure and thanks LK.........Neville
Beautiful heart warming poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, much appreciated.... Neville
Nothing better than when our imagination creates for someone near and dear. The offering of love inspires all. It took me back to when my children were small.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

When I found it after so many years, I was transported back in time, however the principles containe.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

It is so true that's why the older we get the younger we visualize our past.
Neville

6 Years Ago

...........yep x
It's so sweet :) I wish every father was like this. Your daughter must be lucky to have you. :)
This us amazing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Moonlight, much appreciated... Neville
Beautiful words for a priceless emotion!Loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

why thank you kindly Ms Paragon, I do appreciate the visit.... Neville
Ms Paragon

6 Years Ago

My pleasure!
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Your stream of your words is very gentle . I can feel your love and protection of loved ones. This kind of writing alwatys making my day .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Much appreciated Martin, thank you again.... N
I liked the poem but i felt like there was something missing at the end. It seems like you are only listing things (some really nice things). However, i feel you might a little to wrap up. Something along the lines of "i wish all these for you/ because you have earned it" (off the top of my head) or something to show why you want them to have nice things- just to wrap up the poem.
But i enjoyed it very much so keep up the great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

I thank you kindly Momo and you have certainly given me something to think about..... Neville
Momo

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome. And I am excited to continue reading your work :)
Neville

6 Years Ago

how very kind indeed.....
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Gee
Boootiful.
My 17 year old passed her driving test yesterday, so one more thing to worry about.
If she fell as a tot I'd catch her before she hit the ground, used to soften her chewy sweets before giving them to her, breaking them into smaller than bite size pieces, put a man in one of Tescos freezer displays for nearly running her down ( twice) when she was but a tiny tot and have made the boyfriend more than aware that no harm must EVER come to her as I have spent every minute of the last 17 years keeping her safe.
Great read Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

congrats to you both my friend, dont time just fly and thanks for the visit... at 18 yrs mine spent .. read more
.......................Perfectly said. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Relic.. much appreciated.... N
I’m so jealous! I can’t imagine a father that wished me anything but to leave home for good. I used to avoid reading this stuff becuz the contrast was too painful. Now I’m glad to imagine how some beautiful & blessed daughters picked the lucky card & got the best dad imaginable (YOU!) Your poem shows (instead of tells) how you want the best for Bex using a playful mix of everyday & fantasy examples. Thanks for sharing off your warm glow (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

You make me feel so much bigger and better than I truly am, thank Margie x

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Added on June 1, 2018
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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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