Narcissist

for those that dont understand, dont try...

Narcissist

 

Although last seen fading away     

upon a backcloth

of both turquoise and grey

 

The unhappy little fellow

put in a rare appearance again today

But looked like he was drowning

 

Rejected is an understatement

and soon to be deleted he just never

seems to learn

 

Hooray

 

Reviews

[April Blue]

I really love the way the words come together .. it really defines a narcissist .. .

[Neville]

and I am really delighted you took the time to consider these words.... many thanks, Neville

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I think once in while everyone is narciss . I can say about myself I am narciss too. I think prpblem is when is getting too much and can destroy human relatioship etc. Sometimes narcisstic people can be amusing in way they act. And also some people in autistic spectrum can be naricisstic but is not they fault . Its just way how they brain works. Here on WC caffe some people want just hear how they writtings is great or they show off in given reviews. I just give them in they way. I think is good you chose this topic and its very elegant write wqell done.

[Neville]

thank you Martin... N

[lightsong]

Yes, they are not happy, and they will always be unhappy until they learn, they only act to be happy, but they are not, no one is truly happy if they are not satisfied with their selves, and they are not, they only try to decorate their appearing images, Your last verse reminded me with those ones who keep sending me friend requests while they never reviewed me, or messaged me, nor I even knew them... they only send it because I'm someone's else friend, I even got blocked because I didn't accept a kind of that friend request, well... "Hi" at least tell me that before wanting to be my friend?!

[Neville]

well I am honoured then because you have just sent me an essay... unfortunately, they never learn... I blocked my very first WC narcissist last evening... mind you, I think she blocked me first tho.... cheers,, N

[lightsong]

hhhaaa, OK, I have some funny stories about blocking so we all have my friend ;)

[Neville]

I would not be surprised at all... thank you and take care now... N

[Kelly Scheppers]

I believe it's safe to say we outnumber them. Hang in there, Neville! ; )

[Neville]

Will do, cheers Kelly..... N

[Momo]

This poem put a smile on my face. Really felt the happiness come out of the words as i imagined the narcissists in my life. The "Hooray" at the end was a very nice touch to end it.

[Neville]

You are very kind Mohammad and I thank you.. Neville

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

By George, I think you’ve got him Neville! Great, pointed piece you’ve written. He is a sad soul and to be pitied I guess, but then there is medical help he could get for such manic problems, instead of darting out to hurt others. Hope he does.

[Neville]

Lets hope so... thanks Annette... N

[Stella Armour]

really can't do with narcissism, it's a nasty trait..... so selfish

whoever he is i hope he drowns in his own ego ...

[Neville]

most probably has by now...... ta Stella x

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This may be brash...but today I feel as if everyone needs to get over themselves. I think we all have a bit of narcissistic tendency....the key however is to use it responsibly and without harm. I do not get the breaking the stepping stones thing..we are to help each other not disable. sad, sad world, but, great feeling in poetry

[Neville]

Many thanks Queenie.. the visit is much appreciated.. as is, your comments Neville

[sette]

i really like how you blend words and write it so well

[Neville]

I am so glad you found these words and left a little bit of you behind....

[Chris Shaw]

Met a few myself in the world of business and certainly on other poetry sites. Might even encountered one here, but as a newbie, not quite sure yet.


Chris

[Neville]

be careful...

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you .....