Victims of Truth

if the truth hurts....

Victims of Truth

 

I am a victim of truth

You are a victim too

Therefore

We are both victims

Of honesty

I would but say this tho

 

If the swallow truly be

The dolphin of the skies

I would have you

Shade your eyes  

Let me be your ocean

Then come drown in me

 

Reviews

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Yes we are all victims of truth . But we are just victims of truth. Cause people using the truth like weapon and strategy how put another human beign down. I think its more depending how we say truth and why. Lies can hurt our self well when they relived. Great thoughts for our modern times .

[Neville]

Thank you for visiting these words of mine and for leaving your thoughts behind... much appreciated... Neville

[sette]

but still truth will always prevail no matter how painful it can be

[Neville]

you are absolutely correct of course... thank you sette .. N

[emmajoy]

Seems two channels of thought here, the first a stroke of philosophy and the second, just good ole warmth! Not long back from the sea, is much the same as an ocean, surely!!!? You have a way .. ..

[Neville]

So do you..... bless ya ms emmajoy...Neville

[emmajoy]

Smiling, putting cold glass against my cheeks, tis wonderfully wondrous.

[Neville]

I may have to crack open something soon myself.... smiling is good innit..

[Neville]

rose..........

[emmajoy]

It is, repeated... there can be a lifEtime of happiness in a single smile at certain times.

Is nearer seven now, go find a soothing tonic

[barleygirl]

I wonder how many admiring ladies will be taking the plunge, then?!?! *smile* I drowned a while back, but I’ll swim in your nectar any time. Maybe we can dive down & re-discover the truth that has been bashed & berated, in favor of fake news . . . *sigh!* Is swimming in your ocean and being a victim of truth mutually exclusive states of mind? I have no idea, I’m just rambling at the outset of what will be our first truly summer-like day & I’m already melting into an ocean of anticipation (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

not many I should think.. most would be far too sensible.... I need to ponder the other bit... have a great summer day Margie.. nug ya... I do

[Chris Shaw]

Your second stanza truly beautiful Neville. 'Let me be your ocean, Then come drown in me'. What an invitation. I have joined the queue. Fine words from your pen.

Chris

[Neville]

aw gawsh... that's the sound of me blushing.... ta Chris... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Nah, it's a touch of too much sun (lol)

[Neville]

maybe.. I have been playing with me new mower and vest off.... N

[Chris Shaw]

Boys and their toys. What fun.

[Neville]

you would never believe it..

[Chris Shaw]

Yes I would. I've got one like you. A kid with boats

[Neville]

I just sold mine..

[Chris Shaw]

Your new mower isn't one that you sit on by any chance?

[Neville]

Nah sorry, why did ya wanna lift..

[Chris Shaw]

Lol, I had this vision of you bombing around your garden as though it was a race track!

[Neville]

nope, I plod...

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sometimes the truth needs to be an ocean taking over our senses and us being submerged in order to be able to see the truth that lies within- it someone be your truth what more could we ask for the openness and trueness if truth making two ...one.. just wonderful🌹

[Neville]

you are too kind my friend... many thanks indeed for checking in and considering my words.... Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Captivating they are your work is thought stimulating and takes you to another place in time- depth within the deep - wonderful- always a pleasure to read 🌹

[Neville]

Bless ya........ N x