Little White Lies

Little White Lies

A Poem by Neville
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Just a bit of fun and nonsense...

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Little White Lies

 

Is it okay

To tell little

White lies

Not on a Sunday

She said

Much to my surprise

 

Is it okay

To talk

Nonsense instead

Of course

It is crucial

So go right ahead

 

So he did

And she listened

Or rather

She read

Now she can’t

Get his voice

Out of her head

 

© 2018 Neville


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Its the nonsense part that gives us away...you got that right. People lie for so many reasons, I think each must be weighed of its own and given credence or not. On the surface this is quite cleverly nonsense as you describe, but brush off the frost and the is cold hard icy truth and you have no choice bot lick it and see if your tongue sticks. As always...great writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you for such saintly words mate.. a visit and a half.. and no kiddin... N



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ahahahaha what a great chuckle from me chakra center belly ... i just love your humor, rhyme and flow sir ..this is a great one says i! maybe Playboy would publish it ;))
E.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

regards to each of them chakra's E... made me smile too when I first thought of it... hope you are w.. read more
Sometimes lies are not necessary, although omissions can sometimes be kinder than additions.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

and so say all of me........ bless ya
Its the nonsense part that gives us away...you got that right. People lie for so many reasons, I think each must be weighed of its own and given credence or not. On the surface this is quite cleverly nonsense as you describe, but brush off the frost and the is cold hard icy truth and you have no choice bot lick it and see if your tongue sticks. As always...great writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you for such saintly words mate.. a visit and a half.. and no kiddin... N
Just tell me beautiful Lies Nev! People lie, love lies...its just a process...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

you probably wouldn't believe me....
I would ask you to give me a given qualification for white lies but now I can't get this poem out of my conciousness either. I even sang a few bars of I know a song that'll get on yer nerves, get on yer nerves etc.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

cheers Ken... consider it done sir.. Neville
WOW!!! This is so good. I enjoyed this write. But lies are lies, no white ones in my opinion

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

many thank you's blowin your way my friend.. a much appreciated stopover... All Good Things, Neville.. read more
Such a cute little ditty, Neville. White lies....as far as I am concerned, lies are lies. There is no way to measure them as big or small...no time they are permitted. Perhaps I live in Utopia! :) Happy New Year to you, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

bless ya Lydi** many thanks indeed.. and that's the truth.. Happy New Year too x
There are white lies and then there is an omission of truth, a diversion if you will, you may tell me that these glasses don't make my head look fat but not on Sunday, Sundays we say how they magnify my lovely eyes ? love...takes finesse.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

I shall drink to that.. cheers.. N:)
Corset

5 Years Ago

Salute! ……………………..
Neville

5 Years Ago

............ :)
If you tell one lie then you will tell more... But this was a good write thank you for sharing..


Posted 6 Years Ago


a lie is still a lie no matter what color it is... lol..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

How very true blue of you........ N
sette

6 Years Ago

i like the color blue

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