There is a point somewhere along the pleasure pain continuum where the two become exquisitely blurred... so come on, make my day be brutal with me...... Neville
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Gentle, wonderful and perfect flow of words and thoughts. You made the feel the want and the need of your words. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Good morning Neville, how can I be brutal about this lovely uplifing, love poem which warms the heart? So tender and full of loving and longing at the same time. Wouldn't it be wonderful to stay in that state permanently. Alas, after a period of time we are all brought back closer to earth rather than being up there in the stars. Very much enjoyed the read.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
You are far to generous, but I like it....thank you.... Neville