Away With Words

Away With Words

A Poem by Neville
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Something a bit different maybe. Come on, don't be shy now....

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Away With Words

 

Away

 With words 

The wordsmith sighed

Discard all those verbs

Then leave your vowels outside

Let us write about love for a change

 

 

Aye

Away with words

Forget about your pride

The end is nigh the blank page cried

Why don’t we talk about peace for a change

 

 

Away

With words

Go take a walk outside

Forget politics, religion the weather and sex

Let us all think about …………….......for a change


Please feel free to add your own word in the space above

 

   

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Remember this is open to all, so no naughty words ya hear........

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Shaped like a Christmas tree and then you invite your readers to place a gift of a word on it. An older poem and many of your readers have already placed words that I myself would have chosen. I will choose another. "Friendship". That is mine. When times get tough, your friends will sustain you. They will be there to help. Friends are priceless.
I like your interactive approach, it is novel, or maybe Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

now you have gone and done it, using the c word like that in the middle of June.. thank you tho Chr.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Hmm don't normally mention it till November. I stand reprimanded :)



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Let us think about the world for a change.
Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Write on then shall we. Cheers Paul...
Let us all think about poetry for a change. It is why we are here in the first place. It is the panacea for all our spiritual wounds. Thank you for this insightful poem N.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Hey, thank you Divya for both the visit and the sound advice..............N
AYVID N

7 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Being ignorant, have to ask, if this form of writing a specific one.. there's meter and yet not.. but through and through it has shape and resonance?

As to my word.. just one.. .. ' harmony,' perhaps, 'tolderance' undoubtedly, 'love' definitely,. Is there a word that provides a remedy for all ills?
'Miracle', perhaps@.

Such a challenging, finely laid post, Neville.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Old maybe......
emmajoy

7 Years Ago

Neville Informed?.
Neville

7 Years Ago

That'll do nicely, thank you....
Sleep? :p I guess I could do with some ;p

On a serious note, I think peace is the word alright. Sometimes tuning out the bad things and thinking positive is a good therapy.

Your title grabbed my attention 'cause I have a piece titled 'A way with words' which I edited yesterday. Maybe it's an interesting coincidence :)
I enjoyed the read 😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

The similarity is certainly coincidental. Glad you got something from my similarly entitled scribbl.. read more
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Gee
Tolerance. The world is an awfully fractious place at present. A few more should bite their tongue, count to ten ( or more) and respect the fact all have an opinion.
Morning Neville, enjoyed the read. Hope all is well out West

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Gee, I do appreciate and value your opinion. The West is great, so much to do and s.. read more
Gee

7 Years Ago

Calcium by the bucket load may or may not help !!!
Neville

7 Years Ago

Ha ha, ouch!
We can always talk about poetry! some times silence speaks volumes , and just a glance gives assurances, and a touch tells tales !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

I will not object but there are many here who are more deserving..N
Mrudula Rani

7 Years Ago

WC is a world of words, the writers are amazing here. It is human nature to pick favorites isn't it?.. read more
Neville

7 Years Ago

Yes of course, thank you.....Neville
yes, let's add peace....it rings with the combination of all of those good things you mention---
i am from the peace generation...and relate so much to this....
this poem reminds me of something Steven Martin once said---talking about the new novel he had just written....."this is the first novel in which i started to use verbs; my writing has really started to pick up"---
j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Thank you jacob for checking these words out, your time and your consideration are both very much ap.. read more

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