Sans Sustenance

Sans Sustenance

A Poem by Neville
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Some folk gorge on ideas whilst others yet starve themselves on the edge of grand bazaars and market places......

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Sans Sustenance

 

Despite the hunger

He ignores the gnawing ache

To feast on imagery   

 

 

© 2017 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Go on, take a bite..............

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Very clever and succinct poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Many thank you's indeed Alexis Turner, much appreciated...... Neville
I call this going down the rabbit hole. When I get lost in my process and loss myself to a drawing or a craft and hours past by before I realize I haven't eaten all day. I like how you have put it here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

How very kind of you, thanks blown in your direction.... Neville
Is this a haiku poem? I kept reading over and over to ensure I don't misunderstand the essence of what this poem is all about. Often when a writer gets into a flow, even hunger can't stop him right?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

It is supposed to be... not the best but hey... not to worry, haiku's are meant to be variously perc.. read more
Kichu

6 Years Ago

I agree with u. Like Shakespeare said, 'no work of art is good or bad, it always depends on the beho.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

Let's both hold on to that thought...... Neville
Feast on imagery. Such a wonderful image that conjures in the mind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Thank you Lyn... you just made me feel peckish...... Neville
I bit your 5: 7: 5 and imagined far more than..

I believe it was the Romans that thought that if honey didn't cure an ill, cabbage would! For sure, there's an elixir for the sadness in Man, he just has to accept it, cherish it - share it. LOVE. But, but, but, must be its reality, not its make-believe. We should all take a bite!

Posted 6 Years Ago


emmajoy

6 Years Ago

There's a word for people like you! I adore honey.. and coleslaw - does that count?! As to the Ro.. read more
Neville

6 Years Ago

of course it counts... toga's.. just you be careful. I once saw a man eating one in India... oops so.. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

No comment... :))
Reminded me of Matthew 4:4 - and that; 'man cannot live on bread alone ---' we need help from outside influences, if we are to fulfil our destiny … very though provoking short write - liked it immensely! :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

you are very kind sir, thank you.. Neville
If food and drink don't quell that hunger, than what better than to feast on imagery. Some, so satisfying that it can feed the soul even though it may not fill your belly. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neville

6 Years Ago

Absolutely...on the one hand, there is hunger, and then of course, there is hunger....thank you Chr.. read more
Do you mean feeding the soul instead of settling for superficial things?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Something like that my friend, thank you for checking in....N
Strong and powerful use of words. It is amazing what the human body can accept. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Neville

7 Years Ago

Thank you ..........N
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
This happens to me sometimes when I'm angry. I just close myself to the beauty around me. Beautifully written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

7 Years Ago

Hello stranger, then you are not alone.Many thanks to you..........Neville
AYVID N

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.... :)

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