Just About Had Enough

Down down, deeper & down...

Just About Had Enough

 

I

Lost

 Count

Of

 The

 Times

 

I

 Threatened

 To

 Leave

Her

 

Until

 She

 Finally

 Called

 My

 Bluff

 

Hey

 Babe

She

Eventually

Said

 

 You

 Can

 Go

 Now

If

You

Choose

 

I

 Have

 Just

 About

 Had

 Enough

 

 

Author's Note

Straight down the line, as straight as a dye

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

The boy who cried wolf too many times. He was finally left to his own demise. I’m hoping this ended a bit better! Love the stark and straight form as well as the turnaround at the end. Well-done!

[Neville]

Thank you Annette, much appreciated

[Norman 223]

Singularly aligned to " the biter bit" :-)

[Neville]

Cheers Norman...

[BBP]

That's the thing with threats isnt it? You have to eventually be willing to live them out.

Great little write.

[Neville]

My kind of woman, maybe. Bless ya BBP I sincerely appreciate your time & of course your opinion regarding these words of mine.......N

[BBP]

OF course...thanks for the read! :)

[Neville]

Phew, I gotta stop for a moment, I need to reciprocate, erm I'm assuming that's the right word. Cheers my dear literary friend.........All Good Things, N

[Paul Bell]

Bloody women and their sixth sense.
I could say you'll need to be more canny in your thoughts. But she'll still know.

[Neville]

Cheers, does that mean you like it, or what?

[Paul Bell]

Brill. Up my street.

[Neville]

Then I am repleat, cheers.....N

[DIVYA]

I love this poem and found it so amusing too. People who say it, don't ever really leave. They're too loving, so its always "Just about enough" but never completely so. To me this poem speaks of a deep love. Aprreciated so much!

[Neville]

Perception, or the interpretation of stimulus received via the senses, is indeed a remarkable thing. Bless ya D

[DIVYA]

Thank you dear friend.

[wordman]

so pack them bags,greyhound await`s you

[Neville]

Well thank you for pointing me in the right direction

[wordman]

my pleasure !