How Did We Loose Our Clothes ?

  

How Did We Loose Our Clothes

?

 

From out of the blue these two questions arose

Did we ever sleep together? Is that how we lost our clothes?

 

No we never slept together as far as I recall

We were far too busy doing other things which says about it all

 

At the time in question though

Each of us was hurting and just needed to feel wanted or maybe wanted to feel needed I suppose

 

Only one thing for sure is certain

Heaven knows we both hid behind that same curtain

 

So maybe that explains the mystery of our missing clothes

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Reviews

[barleygirl]

I've felt this way a few times! *heh! heh! heh!* Good way to play with your readers' minds, throwing out suggestions & observations that don't quite stack up, & leaving the assumptions to us! *smile* Very creative & true-to-life. I love this line: "Did we ever sleep together?" (One can only appreciate this if you've had to ask).

[Neville]

Bless you barleygirl, most astute & I am indebted to ya, t'boot....N

[Tom]

There is an alluring coyness enshrouded within your fine poem Neville, much enjoyed!

[Neville]

You sir are Mr. Mega Astute, you just made my day...............N

[Tom]

A pleasure as always my friend!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Our vulnerability exposed for all to see – this is how I interpreted your write! Very contemporised and poignantly penned! Nice work ….

[Neville]

Cor blimey, thanks a million. Your consideration of these words is much appreciated. All Good Things, N