Never Fall In Love With Me

Take it or leave it...................

Never Fall In Love With Me

 

Never fall in love with me 

He said

But rather let us savour 

Each and every moment 

We both snatch and share 

Instead

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 Never fall in love with me 

She said

But rather let us savour 

Each and every moment 

We both snatch and share 

Instead

…

 

Author's Note

Said it time & time again..................................It never works..............................................or maybe it does

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I see this is an old poem out for a breath of spring air. This seems to be an arrangement between two people who are probably in love with their jobs and have no time for romance but still have physical needs. Friends with benefits I think they call that nowadays. Almost a bloomin business arrangement in itself. It could also be a bloke who is out for a bit on the side because his wife has put a lock on the bedroom door. Could it work, maybe it could. My head tells me it could, my heart says it can't because one of the two will become romantically attached. Probably the woman. Men can have have sex without romantic attachment, I think most women would find it difficult. Those are my thoughts for what they are worth. What interesting ideas you pose for your readers Neville. Of course it is always good to live in the now. Can't disagree with that at all. I sense pending doom here though. Feel it in my water.

Chris

[Neville]

I am working through a lot of old stuff our Chris and find that quite a lot are requiring, or might benefit from an airing... some re tweaked.. this one was.... N :)

[Chris Shaw]

Good to air old poems, nothing wrong with a bit of tweaking every now and again :)

[Stella Armour]

a short review Neville , just to say i agree with everything Chris has already said .... :)

[Neville]

Well who's gonna argue with the pair of ya... not me and that's for sure... Cheers Pat.. N :)

[lightsong]

You said it instead of me thoughtfully beautiful with awareness dear Neville, I always thought it's better to say I love You "each day", than to say I love You forever, how about that my friend? aren't Your gem words say the same somehow?

[Neville]

thank you my friend yes.. how lovely and probably very sensible too...

[Einstein Noodle]

no ...it don't :{ not unless both parties are completely platonic ... it is pain to even begin to give it a try .. love your straight talk poem .. maybe its my dirty old man that smiles at your closing word play .. it's the sucker punch in such one way situations
E.
ps and if not one way .. i still say it is going to end badly .. most likely for both

[Neville]

Well what'dya know folks, the guys a genius. Cheers E.N my friend Oh & Seasons Greetings..........N

[Einstein Noodle]

same to you Neville