All These Things

All These Things

A Poem by Neville
"

Gonna let you decide

"

All These Things

 

Whether it had anything to do with that perfect shade of cornflower blue

I caught a glimpse of yesterday in my rear view mirror I may never know

 

 

Whether it had anything to do with the sound of tears rolling into the gutter

Like rain from the pavement also remains to be seen

 

 

Whether it had anything to do with that last lingering caress

I still taste and feel every now and then when I am on my own I may never know

 

 

Whether or not it has anything to do with that rare scent

Which still teases me and only she could wear I may never know

 

 

I like to think it may be all these things and that she might still be looking out for me

Although I may never know for sure

 

….

 

© 2016 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
There goes another one............................

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Open to different interpretations, I like it.
The last verse makes me want to believe that it's a lover "we've" lost looking out for "us" from heaven.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Why thank you for considering these words my fine literary friend, much appreciated.....
Papaya

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
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1VJ
Intriguing, is she gone from sight or to the cornflower blue beyond. Last verse makes me think the latter is true. Poignant either way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Neville

8 Years Ago

Cheers Paloma, but am gonna let you decide
If we have lived more than an instant in this life, we have these memories. A divine poem. Brought back some memories of my own.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Thank you KLG

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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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