No Room to Maneuver

No Room to Maneuver

A Poem by Neville

Never

 Satisfied

 Always

 Yearning

Unfulfilled

 Forever

 Searching

We

 Have

 No

Certain

 Future

 You

 And

 I

 

For

 I

 Am

 Held

 By

 Some

 Psychosis

Whilst

 You

 Are

 Still

 Tethered

To

 A

 Portion

 Of

 The

 Sky

 

Without

Any

Doubt

Though

Whilst

We

 Both

 Want

 To

 Say

I

 Love

 You


For

Some

Obscure

Reason

We

  Are

 Forced

To

 Say

 Goodbye

© 2016 Neville


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okay, first thing....the straight line effect works so well for this idea...neither will go outside the box, take the risk...they both keep their affections in line...

and the quickest way from point A to point B...and here we go from possibilities of love to "goodbye"

just like we make a B line from love when we have been hurt enough times...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Many thank you's for taking the time to consider the structure and interpretational (a neologism of .. read more



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okay, first thing....the straight line effect works so well for this idea...neither will go outside the box, take the risk...they both keep their affections in line...

and the quickest way from point A to point B...and here we go from possibilities of love to "goodbye"

just like we make a B line from love when we have been hurt enough times...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Many thank you's for taking the time to consider the structure and interpretational (a neologism of .. read more
two people hanging, where is this going, seems we aren't enough for each other - it's not working for both of them

steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

I am most grateful for your time and consideration. All Good Things, N
highonwords

8 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

steph
Neville

8 Years Ago

Cheers steph, cheers indeed......N
like the ways of globe trotting... many sad goodbyes and yet it is not forever, the memories stay with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Many thank you's indeed are blown in your direction dear Circe & yeah, those memories eh x
The title is telling. So often we become backed into a corner with no seeming way out.

Thinking the words is easier than saying them.

T



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Many thank you's Terpsichore, very much appreciated. Please accept my apologies for what might seem .. read more
I love it. But then again I always do. A pleasure to read you again. I am especially fond of the line "tethered to the sky"

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

I am most grateful KLG many thanks

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