The Sourest of Limes

The Sourest of Limes

A Poem by Neville
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For all my fine literary friends out there, suck it and see

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The Sourest of Limes

 

You are more bitter than the sourest of limes

My name is Neville Pettitt I aim to fully retire in October 2015 having worked within the field of mental health for 40 years. I currently only work Fridays

If you want to know me though you need to read

I am very happily married & have two fantastic grown up children

between the lines

I drive an Alfa Romeo around town & a very sexy little two seat sports car that puts a smile on everyone’s face when they see it. I regularly give blood & sadly my best friend Steve ‘Havoc’ Hewitt died last year. I no longer have any pets because I enjoy travelling so much that it wouldn’t be fair. I love taking risks & the taste of adrenalin. There, now you know me

Do you feel better now you sweet thing

If you were intrigued enough to stop and read, why not do us all a favour and leave a thought or two behind, it’s the least you can do

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All Good Things, N xx 

© 2015 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
Just trying to make a point folks, that's all

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A very clever write. The only way to read poetry is to study what is between the lines....though often it is not as clear as you have made it here. Congratulations on your upcoming retirement. You will never regret it. I enjoyed this read. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi, your time and encouraging words are always welcome. I do so hope you are right, in t.. read more



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Point taken. But I always read you, my friend, and in between the lines as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Thanks KL, as always stopping by and considering my scribbles sets me up for the day...N
I recommend an aviator with "come play with me" eyes.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Why?...............................
mattavelli

9 Years Ago

You will get more comments on your writing...............
I imagine October will be the start of a search for somewhere tranquil by the sea.

Sweet and sour, the best of both worlds.


Beccy. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you Beccy, much appreciated and always welcome. Yes, I am looking forward to October but the s.. read more
i feel better allready,,lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Cheers wordman
A very clever write. The only way to read poetry is to study what is between the lines....though often it is not as clear as you have made it here. Congratulations on your upcoming retirement. You will never regret it. I enjoyed this read. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi, your time and encouraging words are always welcome. I do so hope you are right, in t.. read more

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